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A Brand New Love Word

How many ways can we write about love Without words we've already used Could invent some new ones but most of you people Would be lost and really confused So we stick with same old time honoured phrases Safe that our message gets through Sure like to shock you with some uppity words Invent a real new word or two Something like, “I love you profusely” Nah, that doesn't do it for me How about, “love you like a kick in the face” To some it means, “I love thee!” Maybe too violent for the average Josephine Perhaps, “I love you like chocolate pudding” Don't be shy, but no naughty stuff And refrain from pussyfooting So here's what I suggest the new word should be Holypoopadoodlezissbamboo “Kinda long!” I can hear you guys mumbling So maybe just the old “I love you!” © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 3/1/2014 8:31:00 AM
My favorite.....googlymoogly.....to ya...lol...:-)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/1/2014 8:37:00 AM
"googlymoogly" LOL That works!!! I googlymoogly you dear Donna! Big huggeroonies, Jacko XOX
Date: 2/27/2014 4:24:00 PM
No words can surpass the simple I love you but nice try brother Jack would like to see your next valentines poem with the words holypoopadoodle etc :-) jan x
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/27/2014 5:02:00 PM
I holypoopadoodle you too dear brother xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/27/2014 5:00:00 PM
Thanks dear Jan... I holypoopadoodle you! Hugs, Bro Jack XOXOX
Date: 2/27/2014 10:51:00 AM
If you shorten it to -Holypoopa", Im with you...laughingly..BG
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/27/2014 10:56:00 AM
Then it's a done deal... "holypoopa" it is! LOL Loving hugs, Jack XOX
Date: 2/27/2014 8:49:00 AM
Yup...I love you will do the trick. Good one...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/27/2014 9:48:00 AM
Works every time eh! Loving hugs, Kenny XOXOX
Date: 2/27/2014 7:29:00 AM
Dragon says when he gives each penguin a good night kiss, that it's Dragon love... Says he got the idea from me when I kissed him good night and told him he'd always have Mama's love. My Hubby gets Sugar and Spice. But all my little friends get gentle, helpful love... I told Dragon: No matter what you call it... It's still love... And something that No One can get enough of. That made Dragon smile!So Dragon, the penguins, and all us are sending you and Cathie... our undying love... Smilling yet?
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/27/2014 7:37:00 AM
Cathie and this old fart are sending back our undying love to you, your dear hubby and all your guys! XOX
Date: 2/27/2014 6:47:00 AM
- Love is a theme that is good to write about - love is to be shared .... every day ... all week ..... over and over again ..... - love flying from Norway to you Jack ................ - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/27/2014 7:20:00 AM
Long live love... I'm with you, my dear Anne-Lise! WOO HOO! Loving hugs, Jack XOX

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