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A Boatload of Lims

A boatload of lims I scribbled last night They came flying at me in a blinding light Overtaking my soul Had no control Eliminated the ones that weren't too polite © Jack Ellison 2015

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Tim Smith

Date: 11/12/2015 2:20:00 PM

Pull anchor, set sail this boat of lims...it's going to be either sink or swim...let them float...won't sink the boat...cause I'm watching from the shore, your Limertim

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/13/2015 7:13:00 AM

Hey Limertim! Hope your Friday is bright and shiny... ours is dull and cloudy! But this is shaping up to be a mild autumn and hopefully, a mild winter as well! YEE HAW!

Carol Eastman

Date: 11/12/2015 2:15:00 PM

I only read to Dragon the loveable ones... But he has written plenty of them-es... So naturally here we comes... As Santa Jack takes funny on the runs... Afterall, he's written many a funny bunch of tons... Yep! I've turned into a kid or some sort of old youngun....

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/13/2015 7:09:00 AM

Have you kept track of how many of my poems you've reviewed??? Probably over 2,000!!!!!!!!!! YIKES! Now that's what I call a loyal friend!!! Love, Santa xxx