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A Bleeding Ship

Aboard the titanic. Ruminating on a loved one, soon to be reached. Gazing at the bleached clouds as it holds a couple of doves. Both branded by love. Pleading with the tides to draw me near to her,at last. My love. My all. My first and last. Your face a royal mask. Grounds shake.I hold fast to a railing,it seems to be failing. A bleeding ship. Watching the dying whispers of a couples lips. One last breath from life i sip,before i plunge in the oceans dip. As i stare into the eyes of the dying mass,one hand slips very fast. Dangling, while strangling a tangling death. All the while i was thinking of your tangled blond hair. Wishing you were here,to share one last bonded tear. A tragedy kills with brutality. Many hanging from steel railings and sanity. A trembling ride hands cling anxiously ,broken screams on the way down. A bomb blast from a splash,a falling mass. Out lasted by death,before the dip, they did sip one last breath. A breath they could have kept. Far below, the oceans bed they slept. Loved ones falling reaching for an invisible rope. Lifeless body's left to soak. I swam among the dead and found a floating wooden bed.I survived,from a bleeding ship i arrived. Close to me a couple crying and dying,relying on a flamed embrace in frigid waters. face to face a bonded breath, among many that was lost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/15/2012 8:50:00 PM
traumatic <3
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Date: 6/1/2012 3:11:00 AM
Yikes, I feel the fear in this. Excellent piece
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Date: 4/11/2012 7:50:00 PM
Congratulations Elliott! This was a great write ...Samia
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Date: 4/11/2012 1:43:00 PM
congrats Elliott on a brilliant write and super win for this awesome piece on ther Titanic luv..
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Date: 4/11/2012 9:41:00 AM
Elliott congrats on your win, excellent..David
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Date: 4/11/2012 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "My Heart" contest Elliott. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2012 1:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Elliot xx
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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 4/11/2012 1:07:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 4/11/2012 12:59:00 AM
Excellent write Elliot! Congrats on your win...Well Done and welcome to the Soup :) I like your rythm...very well told...big huggsss,love deb
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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 4/11/2012 1:07:00 AM
thank you.

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