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Violet- blue waters Against the verdant trees Cares float in the clouds Looking over the scene Sapphire sky filled With freedom's breeze Cares gone, now unseen A frame to take and freeze Stop and touch smooth driftwood Sit on its body, reminisce Lean on its strong stripped limbs Where birds once enjoyed to perch Remnants of yesterday's lunch Fertilizer to wash away Nutrition for seaweed on another day Birds of feather did flock this way This scene has lifted My blanket of heavy clay Now there is rejoicing For the rest of the day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/3/2010 8:30:00 PM
WOw, I am glad I came back and found this little beauty I had missed. This is very nice!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/22/2010 6:08:00 PM
great work sara , loved it from start to finish , would love to read more of your work . Matt
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Date: 11/14/2010 12:53:00 AM
Great imagery, Sara. I love the first verse particularly well because it made me think of a beautiful morning sunrise that I recently photographed above green tree tops. (It is in my facebook "Morning Walks" album in case you want to look.) God did a great job creating nature's cycles...nothing wasted. This poem says a lot. Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 11/13/2010 3:14:00 AM
Such a tranquil scene Sara, hope your weekend is a good one ;)
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Date: 11/13/2010 2:32:00 AM
How beautiful your verse is.Final stanza is amazing.Philosophical glimpses are also seen here and there.Great,friend.
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Date: 11/12/2010 11:12:00 AM
Very beautiful Sara, love it (AMMUT~LIN~RA)
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Date: 11/12/2010 10:52:00 AM
I went sea watching with you, lovely:)
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Date: 11/12/2010 10:38:00 AM
You ahve very keen sense of observation in writing this piece, Sara
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Date: 11/11/2010 10:56:00 AM
flowing artisty which only your words can conjure... superb read,sara. warmest, nette
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Date: 11/11/2010 10:05:00 AM
the things we share withthe birds. john
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Date: 11/11/2010 9:54:00 AM
This poem has such a welcome soothing quality, Sara. I hope it gave you some peace while writing of this tranquil scene. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/11/2010 9:19:00 AM
Still workin on it..I see some mistakes but don't have time to change now..Sara
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Date: 11/11/2010 9:18:00 AM
Breathtaking Poetry Sara... The words dance on water... always Michael
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