A Better World

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A BETTER WORLD

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN. PICTURE TAKEN BY ME. (c)

If one day, we humans decide A better world than this to make We ought, in all consciousness, Our fellow man never to forsake.* (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 16 July 2016 *Every day our world becomes a more dangerous place to live because, some people, try to build their happiness over the unhappiness of others.

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Tom Quigley

Date: 7/16/2016 6:42:00 AM

Agree wholeheartedly. Great write!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/16/2016 8:05:00 AM

I am thankful for that dear friend, Tom! Let us hope that humanity will wake up from its indifference slumber! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/16/2016 5:35:00 AM

- We humans have already gone way out of line - We all have a responsibility .... but we continue to forge weapons and hate - Great written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/16/2016 5:48:00 AM

You so right my friend, Anne-Lise. God bless you for caring. Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/16/2016 4:28:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, I agree with this heartfelt write. A Big seven:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/16/2016 5:02:00 AM

Thank you my dearest, Alexis for your vote of confidence! God bless you!

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/16/2016 4:04:00 AM

Truly said and beautifully too ... but subject to a universal decision which will never happen ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/16/2016 5:01:00 AM

When the day comes and we will be unable to travel, to enjoy an outdoors walk, to go to a theater, to a football game, to send our children to school, you will see my good friend, Probir, this universal decision HAS TO HAPPEN otherwise we will remain prisoners of fear inside our homes! Thank you for your lovely visit and comment my friend!