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A Better View

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A Better View

Before the show was done you flew away…
Shadows casting as the curtains sway…
Your feelings inside fall to incomplete…
Never heard the sound of my heartbeat…
All that’s missed and tossed away…
Scribbled on paper of yesterday…
My silence screamed on empty ears…
You only answered your inner fears…
I crawled down a ladder till I was on top…
And with this Angel beside me my words won’t stop… 

....when we write of the past we must end in the present.... MJF

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  1. Date: 2/12/2013 11:32:00 AM
    Beautiful poem that touches my feelings. Truly marvelous.

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 12:36:00 PM
    This is a fabulous and wondrous write my friend! You have enthralled me with the tenderness of your poem, a great masterful piece! What a dynamic poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 10:32:00 AM
    From your heart of gold comes this gem speaking your truths, Michael. God bless you and Rosanna! Love, annalise

  1. Date: 2/3/2013 7:15:00 AM
    Michael, this is truly a beautiful and touching poem, written with so much emotion and I like your comment on the bottom, it is true,Constance