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A Bench In the Rain

Sitting on a city street bench in the rain; Raindrops disguise the tears upon her face; People rushing by, umbrellas raised, Hurrying to find a dryer place. In her hands the paper sags and drips; The words may fade but not the prognosis; How will she tell her seven year old son, That yesterday’s birthday will be her last one? Sitting on a city street bench in the rain; Lacking the resolve to head back home again; A single mother burdened with the news, Her fight against this monster she will loose. Thirty-six candles were on her cake; She wished the first tests were a mistake; Her son helped ensure they all blew out; Now she sits in the rain and wants to shout. Sitting on a city street bench in the rain; The hoards passing by pay her no mind; The words to say to her darling little boy The crying, weeping lady cannot find. Sitting on a city street bench in the rain…

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Date: 10/24/2011 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Everyone Knows" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/22/2011 8:42:00 PM
Congrats Joe on a super fantastic win with this creative entry in the contest luv..
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Date: 10/22/2011 1:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Joe. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 10/22/2011 12:44:00 PM
This really grabbed me Joe. A lot of emotion contained here. A great write. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 8/7/2011 1:12:00 PM
I loved it, it reminds me of my grandma.
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Date: 8/1/2011 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/31/2011 11:56:00 PM
Congrats Joe on this deeply touching poem being featured. Vince
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Date: 11/12/2010 4:33:00 PM
This is very well written, moving poem,thanks for sharing it with us.Sandra
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Date: 11/12/2010 12:55:00 PM
Wow...a powerfully sad poem, a huge story in just a few lines. I can see this as a painting displayed in an art gallery....titled "Sitting on a bench in the rain". A moving piece this is.~
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Date: 11/12/2010 10:54:00 AM
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem! - Best, Karen
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Date: 11/12/2010 10:31:00 AM
Very good poem, I loved the pictures it put in my mind. Very sad and well written.
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