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Zephyr of Spring

Spring's yellow-green heart shaped tender leaves blown Spring's zephyr winds tossed new leaves to and fro Quickly from hidden laden buds now grown Absorbing sunlight, spring's green soon to go Rabbits now from their cozy burrow run Hop, jump enjoy green tender shoots of grass While lazily basking in morning sun Then in late afternoon hide as clouds amass As the twilight cast its eerie shadow The sleeping birds roost in their summer nest Sleepily fawn_doe in lush green meadow Darkness of night with shadows now brings rest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/20/2011 7:03:00 AM
I can hardly wait. Love, daver
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Date: 4/19/2011 3:29:00 PM
a lovely write about spring, really enjoyed, so refreshing as is spring.
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:08:00 PM
Well Sara! i don't know whether to dash out, and (spring about)..very undignified... (but fun)...or to doze awhile, along with those birds in their domicile! very pleased to read this engaging piece today!
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Date: 4/16/2011 5:07:00 PM
You make spring sound so very lovely :) Thank you for writing this!
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Date: 4/16/2011 1:52:00 PM
Lovely ode to spring Sara. If it is for a contest I think could be a high winner. I just came from a sad funeral for a young man of 42 who couldn't get away from his depression any other way than by taking his own life. So sad. But in my mail was my book of Robert Frosts poems. And that brought cheer back into my day. I can't wait to start reading. That didn't take long at all from the time you mailed it. Thank you, thank you. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/15/2011 7:38:00 PM
Lots of images from nature, Sara. I have always loved that romantic word zephyr for a breeze. And I really enjoyed this spring to summer quatrain.
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Date: 4/15/2011 6:02:00 PM
your vivid write depicts the essence of spring in all of her glory.
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Date: 4/15/2011 5:24:00 PM
Lovely write on spring with beautiful imagery, Sara
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Date: 4/15/2011 12:48:00 PM
THAT was lovely and refreshing Sara
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:22:00 AM
Hi Sara how you doing Mam Spring has just landed her to what a great time of year , color brings positivity. Lovely poem , I wrote a poem called Gossip please will you read it. Cheers
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:22:00 AM
the lush and charm of spring flows unto this page so fascinating and bright!a lyrical offering, sara.. so well-done.. of for a contest, all my winning huggs! :) nette
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Date: 4/14/2011 7:31:00 PM
Superbly image filled Sara.. a breathtaking refreshing piece of poetry to read .. encouraging Spring to hurry and arrive and enjoy it's beauty as u have so written luv.. impressive words ...
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Date: 4/14/2011 3:28:00 PM
Oh Spring.....loe the season and I loved the poem Jeff
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Date: 4/14/2011 2:00:00 PM
A lovely description of the sites associated with spring, Sara. When the new leaves emerge, that spring green color is so beautiful. Really liked the image of the sun setting and seeing the sleeping birds and the fawn in the meadow. Love, Carolyn
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