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Subtle Shifts

At times I think,” I wish I would of felt this when I were younger, I would have known! ” Then I remember the “rites of passage” arriving in autumn on the the wing of a ring-neck dove. Weaving light between knowing and unknowing.

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Date: 12/2/2016 8:28:00 AM
Another poetic gem that creates such mesmerizing images in the mind. This definitely provoked some thought in me and I like that in a poem. Really nice Faith. I can't wait to see more from you.
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Faith Byrnes
Date: 12/5/2016 12:39:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris! I am enjoying reading your poetry as well.
Date: 12/2/2016 12:42:00 AM
So true! We have turtle-neck doves here, I haven't heard of a ring-neck, though! Different countries I presume! Great write, Faith!
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Faith Byrnes
Date: 12/5/2016 12:40:00 PM
Thank you so much Rick!

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