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Star Crossed Lovers

darkness yells out the daylight charcoal pencil images join to dance within the void shadows kissing in thin air on this black magic evening suddenly they disappear star crossed - like silhouettes lit 08~11~2014

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/13/2014 5:09:00 PM

Mmmmm ....Images within imagery! Your search for uniqueness is well rewarded; beautiful! // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 11/9/2014 8:24:00 AM

love your write Nette,good luck on the contest :) hugs eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2014 12:29:00 AM

Gosh, you just hop from one contest to another. You are becoming such an amazing SOUPER!! I have not seen many in this category but of the ones I saw, yours is a standout!! I love it!

John Lawless

Date: 11/8/2014 4:14:00 PM

Brilliant picture of a lonely walk after the end of a relationship

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/8/2014 2:32:00 PM

I can see this; well done, Maurice. Good luck with the contest.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/8/2014 12:12:00 PM

Wonderful imagery n a perfectly penned Write Maurice! Gl in contest!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/8/2014 11:28:00 AM

amazing imagery Maurice:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/8/2014 9:14:00 AM

Your mastery of word is nonpareil,no doubt you are gifted and I am happy to have come in contact with you. "charcoal pencil Images",that hits the target,goodluck in the contest Maurice.