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Rays of Hope

Sun brightens with full blaze and smile, darkness covers the sun like a blanket-total eclipse, Moon rays spread out their hands from this shield. CONTEST:"Trinity" sponsored by Debbie Guzzi.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/10/2012 6:05:00 PM
Olusegun... love the win...pd
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Date: 11/8/2012 11:43:00 PM
Nicely done, and won!!! Good to see you again on another winners list!
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Date: 11/8/2012 3:41:00 PM
Just loved your use of personification! Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love
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Date: 11/8/2012 3:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Trinity" contest - well done - Huggs / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/8/2012 11:40:00 AM
congrats on your win and the lovely " moon rays". BG
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Date: 11/8/2012 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win xx
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Date: 11/8/2012 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2012 9:20:00 PM
O.A., nice image.. enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD
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Date: 10/27/2012 12:36:00 PM
Loved it! Good luck with the contest :), Omneya
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