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Pride Stalls

In the hours of twilight Where hazy clouds and earth mix Before the noise of life fills the quiet, I recall half-filled moments Upon fields of spite and an angry wind; Unmoved by repeated hushes Denying the plea of atonement Where pride stalls to cross over the light And bow for life's misgivings. Feeling how this wound scrapes my dreams, A scent of silence lingers within Like the tender hints of Genesis Circling around my blood unbidden... And I count myself as one of the many Who stands on the ridge of blind conceit. Yet, a voice from my inner child rings As my errant wiles hide from fear of rejection... That through some willing desire I begin to wrap my hands---forgive; Releasing the power of serenity. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, SKAT's Any Old Poem #6

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/7/2015 2:39:00 PM
nice to see this on the winning list again.... PD
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Date: 7/7/2015 4:13:00 AM
Wonderful nette! Big congrats!
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Date: 7/6/2015 9:35:00 PM
Nette :) Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 2/28/2015 8:25:00 AM
Hi nette: Congratulations, beautiful poem!
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Date: 2/23/2015 9:37:00 PM
Nette, a wonderful write. Congrats on the top win. My poem, though not placed in this contest, also expresses similarly, but not as well as you put it. Mohan
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Date: 2/22/2015 6:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nicely done :)
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Date: 2/22/2015 12:22:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful :-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/22/2015 8:48:00 AM
What liberty one finds with the releasing and forgiving. Such a beautiful poem... congratulations on your win !! :)
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Date: 2/22/2015 6:38:00 AM
My warmest congratulations on your super win my very dear friend, Nette! I'm so delighted to read you excellent write once again. Thank you so much! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 2/21/2015 10:21:00 PM
Nette, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/21/2015 8:54:00 PM
Wonderful Win Nette.... PD
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Date: 2/21/2015 7:13:00 PM
Wonderful, Nette. Congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/21/2015 3:50:00 PM
Amazing. Congratulations Nette
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Date: 2/21/2015 12:49:00 PM
I am glad my contest brought this poem to my eyes. Congrats Nette.
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Date: 5/6/2014 6:17:00 AM
Stunning imagery. This one is perfection. It is definitely a winner.
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Date: 4/29/2014 3:05:00 PM
Both lovely and spiritual Nette!
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Date: 4/28/2014 9:14:00 PM
I can't even say enough to praise this beauty!! Simply gorgeous, dear Nette!
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Date: 4/28/2014 11:56:00 AM
You really painted some beautiful lines here my friend...The imagery is awesome..I love this and what it represents!!
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Date: 4/28/2014 7:58:00 AM
Have you changed your writing style Nette? beautiful poem :)
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Date: 4/28/2014 5:40:00 AM
I recall half filled moments....a good sight!
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Date: 4/28/2014 5:19:00 AM
The beauty of your heart spills through this majestic poem!
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