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Pomegranates Grow

Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, There's a boy I do know He is long and tall and has a guitar in all Oh how I love him with that tune he plays He has eyes like the blue sky Dreams of stardom and fame He came from Maine, just to be Outside where the pomegranates grow Said I could be the one Oh that could make him stay Stay in one place but those lights Those lights shine bright Pomegranates slowly lose there scent He has eyes like the blue sky Dreams of stardom and fame He came from Maine, just to be Outside where the pomegranates grow So he left, sometimes he comes back He can't look me in the eye, and I cry still Cry for that tune, for that memory Can't ever see pomegranates Without seeing him in my mind. He has eyes like the blue sky Dreams of stardom and fame He came from Maine, just to be Outside where the pomegranates grow

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Date: 5/25/2016 1:37:00 PM
I HAVE A FEELING YOU ARE GOING TO WIN THE CONTEST WITH THIS ONE....LINDA
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Samantha Withee
Date: 5/25/2016 3:29:00 PM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 4/29/2016 9:09:00 PM
A nice little country lyric You often have a country tune style lyric I like that, very well done. You're songwriting skills are improving greatly. Good job on this one.
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Samantha Withee
Date: 4/29/2016 9:33:00 PM
Thanks so much Been working on improving my songwriting work. I'm honored you noticed. Thanks once again.
Date: 4/29/2016 8:47:00 PM
Nicely done Love the chorus, and the first verse. Very good lyric skills you have.
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Samantha Withee
Date: 4/29/2016 9:31:00 PM
Thanks glad u liked it
Date: 4/29/2016 8:33:00 PM
Very well-written Love the little country tune in my head while reading this. It's a great lyric. Love the first verse, it draws me in. Bravo.
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Samantha Withee
Date: 4/29/2016 9:31:00 PM
Thanks a lot Glad you enjoyed it My lyric writing skills are something new.

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