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Pebble's Journey

A pebble is loosened from the peak and starts to tumble down it dings and bounces merrily oblivious to all around it slowly gathers speed until it picks up stones along it's way growing in proportion they journey, laugh and play and as it rumbles down the hill the pebble feels alive moving, always moving with purpose it seems to strive and so it is with love you know it starts so small and slow but given time it gathers speed and continues then to grow and like the pebble gathering stones it can grow out of control crushing those within it's path when and where we never know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/15/2012 7:13:00 AM
Lovely poem and congrats on feature...Patrick
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Date: 7/14/2012 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Trudy. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2012 7:27:00 PM
Congrats Trudy on your poem being featured this week.
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Date: 7/8/2012 3:44:00 PM
Trudy, congratulations with your featured poem of the week.. hope you are enjoying yours~Always ;-) PD
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Date: 3/31/2009 9:55:00 PM
Aww cute! :)
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Date: 9/18/2008 10:04:00 AM
good stuff!! Cherilyn added to my fav poems!! :)
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Date: 9/17/2008 7:17:00 PM
Just like things in life that somehow get out of control. This poem is thought provoking, and can mean so many things...depending on who the reader may be. Good writing! Great job! ~Carrie
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Date: 9/17/2008 6:10:00 AM
Wow. Awesome write. Must agree with other comments here. Excellent. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/16/2008 9:53:00 PM
cleverly written. very observant poetry in a way. Great read! God Speed!, GiNo
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Date: 9/16/2008 8:04:00 PM
I like-Nice write-It takes you there!----God Bless Rick Parise salem, Oregon
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