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Now Finished Poem

Wondering if it’s an omen, finding the box in the attic today?
A treasure trove of memories into our lives
This piece of paper upon which I started to write a poem
I remember at the time I could write no more as I grieved

Missing you as each day goes by and wishing you were here
I know you are in the ever loving arms of our Lord
The Lord sent you down as an angel on loan to us
You were called home dear and we were not ready

I know we will one day be together again
Waiting for the day we will be called home also
Now the poem I started to write to you is finished
Our time together will come again my daughter and 
never end

Written by: Carol Brown
 For The "Treasure Trove" contest of Linda-Marie
1st Place Winner

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  1. Date: 6/12/2012 5:17:00 PM
    hey friend, thanks for always, always supporting my efforts here. Just wanted to see what you've been writing as time is limited for me, take good care, and hey good one here! Thanks again, Love, Cindy

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 5:40:00 PM
    A beautiful ode. Huggs TLee

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 11:07:00 AM
    Such a tender write Carol we can all feel our own losses reading this. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 9:40:00 PM
    congratulations on your winning Carol, truly beautiful heartfelt poem.

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 9:51:00 PM
    "You were called home dear and we were not ready"...Terribly sad. Thanks for sharing this heartfelt poem, dear Carol. God bless you. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 8:50:00 AM
    Carol, your poem touched me so.. to have finished your poem for your daughter in such beautiful lines. A very well deserved win, love always...

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 12:38:00 AM
    Congratulations, Carol, on your win. Very touching poem. Love, Maureen

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 11:49:00 PM
    I am pleased you got the top place with this sensitive piece Carol; also my condolances on the loss you still feel,,yours Joe..)

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 11:55:00 AM
    Thank you all for your comments and congrats. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 8:11:00 PM
    Hello carol, congratulations, your the best. love, leila

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 3:26:00 PM
    This is lovely and I know the feeling. I am glad you could finally finish the poem. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 11:17:00 AM
    a wonderful write that moves me so, carol.. big congrats on your win and thanks loads for appreciating my CAR poem for your recently concluded contest.. :) all my huggs!

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 10:10:00 AM
    very touching poem... congrats on the top placement in the contest Carol.........~sashi

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 9:29:00 AM
    Congrats, Carol. Outstanding well written well deserved 1st Place. Very touching. Great job, my friend. luv and hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 5:26:00 AM
    congrats Carol, this is so beautiful, such feeling here, harry

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 3:52:00 AM
    Send you a congrats for you win. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 11:57:00 PM
    Carol, this is a poignant one, for wanting to be again with your daughter. What a great title for it. A poem now finished for her! Congratulations on your BIG and well deserved win.

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 8:33:00 PM
    congrats Carol on sweet first place win for this deeply touching entry luv.. thankxx for supporting..

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 5:36:00 PM
    Very emotive and expressive work..Reads like a winner for the contest..Good luck..I can feel your pain and longing...Thanks for letting me know that I placed in the contest..Sara

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 5:06:00 PM
    Angel do stay a short time with us, we really feel their loss, after they go:(