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My weeping willows were crying on my chest waiting for me.. Screaming for me to wake. The rain falling on my face;simply trying to shake me back to life..It was to perfect..I didn't understand,one morning a boy then to a man. How may I stand,what should I say;A simple touch on my shoulder. A wink too my eye,we had lost the race but i didn't understand why. He was the best for his position but never the less,all about money,sadly I confess. A game we dared not play,but we would shortly fade.I quickly learned do not play on their terms,shoot the opposition even when you know its wrong,If we would have struck then,this wouldn't have prolonged.Now there gone but I'm still here,sorry,never going away, Kiss my foot Mr.D.A.Your God son, what more must I must I say.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/18/2016 8:33:00 PM
Jai, well expressed... LINDA
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Jai Bankson
Date: 4/10/2016 8:45:00 AM
Have you figured out which one?lol
Date: 10/16/2015 5:41:00 PM
Post the rest Banky
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Date: 12/26/2014 7:29:00 AM
Very interesting expressions on friendship, Jai
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Jai Bankson
Date: 4/10/2016 8:43:00 AM
Yea,That's an understatement.Sorry I didn't know I hadn't thanked you.A kind of follow up was finished last night,That's why I came down to read this,hope you will give it a read and tell me what you think. Take care Jai
Date: 12/26/2014 7:25:00 AM
intriguing write.. mystery!!!
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Jai Bankson
Date: 4/10/2016 8:40:00 AM
I'm so sorry,I just saw this for some reason,I appreciate it and yes,very much a mystery.I shouldn't have posted it until I did a re-write but oh-well.I just finished ''To Much Truth''this morning,its kind of series in a way.Hope you have a read.Thanks again.Sorry again,I was away for bit,Hope you two are still around. Jai

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