Infectious Solitude

slogging through a crowd’s malaise – the glare of smartphones Monoku 4 **04 Feb 2016**

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/9/2016 5:33:00 PM

DAVID, Congratulations On your win. I truly enjoyed every entry placed on my Solitude list. Stop by my latest blog "Silence Ululates" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

James Inman

Date: 2/8/2016 12:00:00 PM

Very nice perceptive write, David.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/5/2016 9:19:00 AM

Very smart monoku, David! That's how life has become! My 'outdated' phone has been a faithful companion for many years!! // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 2/9/2016 3:45:00 PM

Back with merited congrats, David! Well done. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2016 9:00:00 AM

THAT IS GOOD!!! Very perceptive. Never thought I would see the day that I'd be dealing with too much quiet in my classroom instead of NOISE (it can sometimes be grueling dealing with cell phone addicts)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/4/2016 1:18:00 PM

ohh the chatter of gadgets removes us from silent moments, david.. very zen and really good!.. huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 2/4/2016 11:56:00 AM

Great monoku David and sadly so true - I don't posses a smart phone ... quite amazing the kids at school never forget their phones but some don't have a pen!:-( hugs Jan xx