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Below is the poem entitled in a dream which was written by poet Lorraine Ferns. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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in a dream

floating… yellow heat

banana float, tasting good

blue, blue sky…life….. great!

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  1. Date: 11/9/2012 10:44:00 AM
    I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Lorraine. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 5:02:00 AM
    A very well written haiku poem, Lorraine. - Lovely - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 4:40:00 PM
    very uplifting Lorraine. Rollo

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 4:02:00 PM
    sounds amazing, love elizabeth