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-i Wish It Wasn'T a Dream-

~~***~~ I jumped out of bed Heard a baby cry last night It was just a dream ~~***~~

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Date: 9/16/2016 8:07:00 PM
oh my, that would be so weird if it were not a dream and you did not even have a baby!!
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Jenni Kalicharan
Date: 9/16/2016 8:42:00 PM
This was written a few weeks after having lost a baby... Thank you for the read and comment.
Date: 9/15/2016 5:51:00 AM
Both fullness and emptiness ... great haiku ...
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Jenni Kalicharan
Date: 9/15/2016 4:51:00 PM
Thank you, Probir. Appreciate the read and comment!

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