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Embers of Time

The curtain is closing, the door shut. Lights are on, bed is dressed in white. Utensils keep on clanging. Sweat and blood are gently flowing. Tension, pain and countless breathing. There's no seconds to be wasted. The embers of time to save lives in hands. Life support generates to sustain their life. And the long hours of waiting are done. The door opens, people came out from the light. Successful momentum has arrived. Tears are softly coming out from the eyes. An angel was sent from above, Is now cradling in the arms of his dad. The embers of love from the heart. Is flaming like a hot lava rushing in the ground. The life from a newborn child, made two hearts ignite.

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Date: 8/10/2016 2:56:00 PM
This is a special piece written with such heartfelt words of love and hope for a precious new life. The style matches beautifully with the purity of your lovingly penned words. Exquisite writing, A joy to read. blessings, lynn
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Date: 4/10/2014 8:50:00 AM
So much hope is contained within that bundle of joy.
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Date: 4/9/2014 5:51:00 PM
LIght and love. It looks the heavens opened for this newborn child. Sweet way to write on this theme!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/10/2014 7:04:00 AM
Thank you, Andie!! .. your comment is always a precious in my page.. :o))
Date: 4/9/2014 2:35:00 PM
Beautiful, warm feelings when a child is born to loving parents; so well expressed! // paul
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/10/2014 7:07:00 AM
Hey Paul,,, Thanks a lot nice guy.. :O) It is indeed a greatest feeling to see a newborn child... such a heaven's delight!!! ^__^

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