Get Your Premium Membership

' Eggspect the Un-Eggspected '

~*~ earnestly sitting with the crowd cogitating acutely for the uncharted answers delineating each word issued and registered from my brain neurons leave no spaces and blanks analyzed and canvased every facet and item I wrote stood up with ample confidence with myself walked along the path between files of people passed my paper expecting to get the perfect and highest score then,kabloooom! an "egg" for the nth time directions not followed but then,answers were all correct =====================================================

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/16/2016 5:16:00 PM
well done. awesome poem. SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2013 3:16:00 PM
that happened to me also and its exasperating..but love your poem though, congrats for the win my dear //always-Mane
Login to Reply
Date: 11/22/2012 4:51:00 PM
Jun-Jun.... , enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD
Login to Reply
Date: 8/1/2012 4:30:00 PM
Congratulations on the win.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/21/2012 4:17:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 6/19/2012 1:52:00 AM
Jun-Jun congrats on your super win....David
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2012 8:57:00 PM
eggsactly right. I used to teach 13 yr olds and they could not follow directions. So eggsasperating.Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2012 3:32:00 PM
Oh too bad. Correct answers should have done it for you. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2012 11:33:00 AM
Thanks for your egg poem - YOU won a prize !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2012 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Eggs" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/9/2012 12:33:00 PM
good luck in the contest..pd
Login to Reply
Date: 6/9/2012 10:58:00 AM
A lot of egg-poems today jun-jun, and I like yours to - well done. - Wish you luck in contest, hope for a win. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Login to Reply
Date: 6/9/2012 10:09:00 AM
Jun-Jun the title just dragged me in there, well done, I like this..David
Login to Reply
Date: 6/9/2012 9:40:00 AM
very creative and interesting! i enjoyed this!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/9/2012 9:35:00 AM
your title and your poem are quite creative..good luck in the contest.....Joseph
Login to Reply
Date: 6/9/2012 8:42:00 AM
This one is very creative and unusual..Stuff of which good poetry is formed..Enjoyed so much..If for a contest, winner for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence was uplifting..Sara
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs