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Bubbles

A momentary transcience that it had; It floated on the water like it should. The floating form, it’s fleeting and it’s sad, And seeking form—its virtue—if it could. It stayed there for a while, transfixed and still, Reflected floating leaf, a moment’s glance. Companions came to grow its needy fill, In momentary glance; it grows with chance. “How fleeting is my form!” the bubble cried, And sooner than it thought, its death was sung. Resistance is for naught; a viper’s chide, A slither in fluid form, sweeping tongue— Another rises to the surface dark, The tiny form soon grows in silvery dark.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/16/2016 3:17:00 PM
ahhh, even a sonnet on a bubble. There is no end to what the sonneteer can pay tribute to! With this lovely form!
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Steve Hendrickson
Date: 5/20/2016 2:01:00 AM
I just noticed however that the first line's meter was sort of wrong. I corrected it for good measure :D
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Steve Hendrickson
Date: 5/20/2016 12:17:00 AM
And I have a lot more just waiting to be uploaded :)

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