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Alone At Night

I feel unease, when trees creek so As wind chimes chatter to and fro From dusk till dawn my nerves do seize When trees creek so, I feel unease Strange things I see, when darkness falls Soft shadows dancing down the halls Translucent specters watching me When darkness falls, strange things I see At night alone, my thoughts do stray Splintered memories, barbed and splayed So many voices – most my own My thoughts do stray, at night alone The white coats come, when daylight breaks The blue pill helps reduce the shakes First eyes are checked, then straps undone When daylight breaks, the white coats come Swap Quatrain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/10/2014 3:14:00 AM
David congrats on your win....David
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David Mohn
Date: 3/10/2014 3:44:00 PM
Thanks David
Date: 3/9/2014 12:08:00 PM
Wow! This is an awesome write. Glad Andrea liked it as much as I do..congrats. BG
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David Mohn
Date: 3/9/2014 2:45:00 PM
Thanks so much Barbara – just read your Tarantula poem…wonderful!
Date: 3/9/2014 11:08:00 AM
I loved the originality of this one!!! Wow, it was a guy in a mental institution. That really clinched it at the end. Had to give this one a second place win. Congrats on a job well done!
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David Mohn
Date: 3/9/2014 2:36:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I’m truly honored to be placed this high - there are some great poems here
Date: 3/9/2014 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the rhyme perfect, david
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David Mohn
Date: 3/9/2014 2:51:00 PM
Thanks Dr.Ram :)
Date: 3/9/2014 1:44:00 AM
fantastic imagery,david.. you deserve a top win!.. 'grads on your award!.. huggs
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David Mohn
Date: 3/9/2014 2:50:00 PM
Thanks Nette – Yours was hands down the most visually stunning
Date: 3/9/2014 1:09:00 AM
A great work you did here,congrats David.
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David Mohn
Date: 3/9/2014 2:52:00 PM
Thanks so much :)

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