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A Squirrel's Tale - When She Painted the Park Sad

i heard her think ‘maybe alone is all i'll ever know’ as she read the words on the page you could have heard a pin drop the benches, the grass, the lamps, all held their breath then it happened she painted the park sad all the colors faded changed into shades of black everything around her mourned her loss the naked trees as one let out a sigh the birds went mum with not even a chirp you'd have to talk to her tears ask them exactly what she felt ask them!, if you wanted details but from behind my favorite rock i could feel the depth of her pain and i feared she'd never stand again freeze to her death sitting there alone. Suddenly she stood. I could read on her face, she would move on. It was as if she decided that the love she had shared was in itself the reward. She would take the high road and just like that the park smiled and resumed its state of bright colors. Sponsor: SKAT A Contest Name: Dark and Deep (old poems only)

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Date: 5/5/2015 9:11:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Maurice..
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Date: 5/3/2015 10:31:00 PM
Maurice, Congratulations on your win. Thanks for the support. SKAT
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Date: 4/9/2015 8:12:00 PM
WOW! Maurice...this is just beautiful in every way.... What a blessing it is to read such inspiring poetry...very unique expressions...the first stanza had me holding my breath... the personification is breathtaking to say the least. This piece is so pure in descriptive creativity...there's a deep lesson here... "It was as if she decided that the love she had shared was in itself the reward." ..... awestruck, again! Always, Laura
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Date: 10/17/2014 10:14:00 PM
this is very unusual, a tiny mind reading squirrel. It's a fascinating poem. You are so eclectic, Maurice. Just my cup of tea!
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Date: 9/2/2014 10:04:00 AM
Oh My, Maurice, you truly have me smiling today. I might even stay another hour.... :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/2/2014 10:22:00 AM
i am so thankful for your gracious support.
Date: 9/2/2014 9:23:00 AM
yes, I am sweet
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/2/2014 9:26:00 AM
absolutely and sweeter still.
Date: 9/2/2014 8:53:00 AM
:) thanks for the sweet reply, LINDA
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/2/2014 8:55:00 AM
thank you Linda you are so sweet.
Date: 8/15/2014 9:26:00 PM
I have a theory on squirrels, Maurice, anyways, I enjoyed this tale. Very sad, not what I thought it would be... I wonder at times, if birds feel, as you described above... LINDA
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/15/2014 10:32:00 PM
you are so kind. your timing is perfect. a good day for a cheer up. i confess. you made me smile. thank you, lots of love.
Date: 8/15/2014 3:05:00 PM
I lived in Kitchener for many years before I met my wife and moved out west. My brother and his wife live in Oakville.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/15/2014 10:27:00 PM
my sister and her family lived in oakville most of her life she recently moved to mississauga.
Date: 8/15/2014 2:23:00 PM
Very powerful Maurice from a great perspective....sad but beautiful..... Cheers Tim
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/15/2014 2:29:00 PM
oops sorry meant to answer richard with my comment below. thank you for your kind words.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/15/2014 2:26:00 PM
well i lived in vancouver for a few years but came back to toronto seven years ago to care for my parents especially my dad who was very ill at the time.i lost him last year. now i care for my mother who has been bed ridden the last four to five years. it has been the hardest task i have ever taken on but very rewarding.
Date: 8/15/2014 1:29:00 PM
A sad tale eloquently expressed. I see you are also from Canada. I am from Kelowna BC, where are you from?
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/15/2014 2:32:00 PM
sorry my reply to you ended up above you in tim's comment. they have a search warrant out for my brain now.

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