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A Seashell To Remember

As the mercury soared above ninety degrees We piled in the car and headed to the sea It was dad, mom, sister and me My sister was twelve, I was four years past three Once on the beach we roamed around I found a spot to build a sandcastle Sis was talking, a boy she had found And I with the sand, continued to "wrassle" After a while I got bored So I headed towards the water I felt the waves lick my feet And I ventured further to escape the heat Suddenly, a big wave lifted me And carried me out to sea Back on shore, my sister was searching for me At the top of her voice she shouted out my name Her panic set in as she looked to see If the mighty sea had claimed me As her tears started to pour Another wave brought me back to shore After she saw me she dried her tears And told me never again to venture out there "Don't tell mom and dad," she made me swear And then she gave me a seashell, it was my souvenir!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/18/2015 1:04:00 AM
I see your souvenir did rather well in helping you to a top spot Joseph, congratulations..'
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Date: 5/17/2015 1:22:00 AM
Congrats for your win..very well potrayed with beautiful expressions of words...keep it up
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Date: 5/16/2015 2:44:00 PM
Joseph, Congratulations on your Memory of the sea win. LUV LINDA
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Date: 5/16/2015 10:18:00 AM
a wonderful win.....skat
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Date: 5/16/2015 9:08:00 AM
This is pretty nice. I like it very much. Congrats.
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Date: 5/16/2015 1:58:00 AM
Thats scary.. n a well written poem... congrats.. nad
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Date: 5/15/2015 4:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Joseph! Amazing story nicely done! Sandra
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Date: 5/15/2015 1:00:00 PM
What an experience, Joseph! I hope you kept that seashell! Congratulations on your top win. // paul
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Date: 5/15/2015 12:22:00 PM
Quite the experience here! There are not many poems where I seem to forget all about rhyme and structure because the story is so riveting. Also, I fancy that when a poem's structure is as it should be it blends with the poem in such a way as to be only slightly noticeable.
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Joseph May
Date: 5/15/2015 3:27:00 PM
Thank you for my #1 placement Isaiah
Date: 5/15/2015 12:20:00 PM
Very touching....thank you and Congratulations...
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Date: 5/15/2015 12:03:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/14/2015 4:04:00 PM
I enjoyed seeing this one again, Joseph. Get up a new one!! Pretty please.
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Date: 5/12/2015 3:25:00 PM
VERY well written and nostalgic piece here Joseph...I must have been a Dolphin or an Octopus in a previous life because I can't get enough of the ocean. I once had a similar experience to yours when I was a youngster but it was on one of those blow-up rafts...
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:44:00 PM
I found this quite emotional to read - i nearly drowned when i was about 6 - swimming pool not sea but it brought back memories:-( good luck n the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Joseph May
Date: 5/11/2015 10:29:00 PM
It is a very scary experience Jan...hugs
Date: 5/11/2015 3:43:00 PM
wow, what a memory, Joseph. I really enjoyed reading of your harrowing experience.
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Date: 5/11/2015 2:56:00 PM
- Always be careful, a lot of effort in the waves - A "memory" for life, superbly written Joseph ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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