A Guy

A Guy When I see a couple walking I think of me and the guy talking When I see a bug I think of me and the guy giving me a hug When I see a dove I think I me and the guy being in love When I see money I think of the guy being my honey.

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Skat A

Date: 6/10/2013 8:20:00 PM

Katrina, a cute one, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2013 9:38:00 PM

Hi, Katrina i like your guy poem... LOL, sweet & fun Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/8/2013 1:16:00 PM

Welcome to the site. I know you will like it here. You are off to a good start with this first very witty submission.