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WALKING NEAR THE WATERS Under the warm golden hug of sunrise’s bliss shielded by rugged ridges and flagging trees emerged a peaceful scene. Through the clear, somber, sleeping, water sunlight revealed shadows spelling odes beneath; odes unfolded by rising ripples in cerulean gleam, touched by nothing but the gliding breeze which seizes silt and shingles causing baby currents lift. Sparkling like priced pearls in the still noon, their waves, a calm heart’s pulse, speak. I linger, tranquil, afloat in the ageless ocean’s lea, sitting on a dry old rock-sheltered bank, drinking the healing power from the scene. Time is suspend; I see the lake like a child, the ridges and trees, His grand legions line. The shadows stretch, His noble progress to a life unfurled during years of swarming battles. But, He has a wealth of hope and stood amidst the sudden ripples; unmoved by fear, for He can hold the shifts. He who’s polished tough and wise has championed in a sunken time. He matured. He populated good influence calling others to imitate his stance. He promised life without fear cherished with gratitude, and his shared touch was not dulled by passing years. His memory endured, so many remember Him. ______________________________________________________ ~Inspired by the painting: Lake by Georgia Engelhard ~ ***For the painting, Debbi Guzzi's Ten Paintings, Ten Poems, Not for a Contest, thanks for the wonderful experience. __Olive Eloisa D. Guillermo__ 9:17am, January 14, 2015

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Date: 5/21/2017 6:48:00 PM
What a gorgeous poem Olive.
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Date: 3/2/2016 8:12:00 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
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Date: 2/4/2016 1:17:00 PM
Wonderful poetry to this image Olive. Again I'm smiling for you as you pull a poem from this painting, nice one ~~ James xx
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Date: 1/22/2016 1:57:00 PM
Very beautiful...truly inspired...love the imagery...the sense of tranquility ... and the creative ability. Well done Olive_eloi:) ~ Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/16/2016 5:07:00 AM
Your foot note says thanks for the experience..i say the same for having read this wonderful poetry...
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Date: 1/15/2016 8:39:00 PM
Ah, you take me there, Olive. Your personality shines through your writes...sweet, kind and a refreshing spirit. This is lovely! hugs :-)
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Date: 1/15/2016 8:32:00 PM
Olive, you are always at your best... SKAT
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Date: 3/21/2016 4:39:00 AM
thanks much Skat.. =`)
Date: 1/15/2016 6:05:00 PM
very descriptive with beautiful images, Olive. Keep up the good work with your ten poems!
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Date: 2/5/2016 4:00:00 AM
thanks much Andrea.. =`) weeee!
Date: 1/15/2016 3:04:00 PM
Absolutely fantastic Olive, so inspirational!! Best wishes, jean
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Date: 1/18/2016 3:47:00 AM
thanks much Jean.. =`) Im glad you like it.. =`)

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