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Red Rose, Snow, Drops Of Water, Flower, Flower Bud

While the pale stars shine above Entering a world beyond dreams When beauty shines through peaceful harmony Shadows dance where sweet music stands spellbound A link of iron our love so strong Bells inside distant echoes bouncing over oceanic waves We shall never see the ghosts Invading purest crystal light encircled The words are written in white silver Like a bolt of lightening striking clouds On a journey of high waves in your hair Pockets of air within skips kiss every strand I feel dreams meet you in daylight halfway 's Starlight across every wing holds strong Heartbeats inside flames and rhythm will never die Loving only valentines eternal, breathing sands of time Everything will be wonderful, as long as you're near Embraced in sparks destinies fate ever existing romance The quest is holding on until finding earth,s smitten angel My heart has found you breathtaking beautiful spirit we fly free A Collaborated Poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 12.02.2016 (unrhymed couplets)

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Tom Arnone

Date: 5/7/2016 10:32:00 AM

It seems collaboration suites your style. As I noted in a previous post, the words seem jumbled (as if AI chosen); yet, strangely applicable. Is this a planned technique? That aside, a beautiful Valentine's Day poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/7/2016 12:25:00 PM

- Nothing planned ...... someone fit to write together .... others do not :) - Many thanks for visiting and comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 2/27/2016 1:36:00 PM

A beautiful write Anne-Lise and Liam! Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/27/2016 1:48:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and comments, Cecilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 2/23/2016 9:48:00 AM

Beautiful collaboration ;) Thank you for commenting on my poems and have a blessed day!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/23/2016 2:02:00 PM

- Angeline, I'm happy that you like our poems :) - Many thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/21/2016 3:29:00 PM

Well this is very nice as always :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/23/2016 2:02:00 PM

- Debbie, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/14/2016 11:42:00 AM

Beautiful lines penned by both of you. HAPPY VALENTINES DAY to both you you. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/14/2016 12:11:00 PM

- Always a pleasure to see you, dear Phyllis - Many thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 2/14/2016 7:47:00 AM

Wow! This is an extreme beauty my dear friend, Anne Lise and Liam. You're perfect collaborators as always! It's always my pleasure reading your work. Happy Valentines Day to both of you! love lots and hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/14/2016 8:15:00 AM

- Dear Leonora, I'm happy that you like our poems :) - Many thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/13/2016 4:11:00 PM

Excellent poem on Valentine's purity with beautiful picture. a CLEAR 7. Loved always my lovely lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/14/2016 8:14:00 AM

- Many thanks for the beautiful comments, a great honor to receive a 7 - Always a pleasure to see you, my friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Fleming

Date: 2/13/2016 3:19:00 PM

All very beautiful lines - An elegantly constructed poem! Well done to you both! My very best regards, Anne Lise. :) john

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2016 3:33:00 PM

- I'm happy that you like our poems, John :) - Many thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/13/2016 10:43:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, You both sing into the hearts of the readers with your Collaborations. Your words sing in Love's skies. Your colabborative journey keeps growing stronger and stronger. Every poem a beautiful gem on poetry's crown. Your poetic journey shall ever go on. Two excellent poets writing excellent poetry. May your hearts ever sing, may your pens ever run gold. You make Love sing my friends. Hugs....MIKE. XX A seven and into my faves.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2016 11:24:00 AM

- Many thanks for the beautiful comments, a great honor to receive a 7 + fav. - Always a pleasure to see you, my friend Vladislav - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/13/2016 9:04:00 AM

You two mix beauty perfectly, nicely done :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2016 9:31:00 AM

- Casarah, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/13/2016 3:52:00 AM

Your pens make love bloom! Excellent poem, dear Anne-Lise and dear Liam! A seven to each!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2016 6:15:00 AM

- Demetrios, I'm happy that you like our poems :) - Many thanks for visiting a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2016 8:19:00 PM

wow, you guys are at it again making really beautiful poetry together. Awesome.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2016 6:16:00 AM

- A pleasure to share with you, Andrea - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Thomas Martin

Date: 2/12/2016 4:35:00 PM

Lovely and so romantic, Anne and Liam. Good capture of valentine spirit!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2016 6:13:00 AM

- Thomas, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 2/12/2016 4:26:00 PM

Very beautiful A-L and Liam

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2016 6:12:00 AM

- Tim, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor

Date: 2/12/2016 4:14:00 PM

Wonderful write Anne-Lise and Liam. For whoever reads this write. Their hearts will open up and feel the love and passion these special words convey. Congratulations on this dual effort.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/13/2016 6:13:00 AM

- I'm happy that you like our poems, Michael :) - Many thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/12/2016 3:04:00 PM

Your collaborative poem has captured the spirit of “Valentine's Day" with words that awaken the romance that dwells in the hearts of lovers, which through neglect, has been allowed to remain dormant far too long. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/12/2016 3:22:00 PM

- Thanks for the beautiful interpretation on our poem Emile, greatly appreciate your visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/12/2016 2:52:00 PM

Beautifully done Anne-Lise and Liam...another win for the heart...Happy Valentine...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/12/2016 3:18:00 PM

- Winged, thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - Best wishes for a romantic Valentine Day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/12/2016 2:40:00 PM

ohh, happy hearts seen through your endearing write, anne... have a good day and huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/12/2016 3:17:00 PM

- Thanks for the lovely visit and comments, Nette - Best wishes for a romantic Valentine Day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 2/12/2016 1:38:00 PM

as always you both do well....such passion and inspiration in the stories you tell....so riveting and Beautiful, Love starts to swell....even without rhyme, you cast a wonderful spell....bravo to you both....;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/12/2016 1:45:00 PM

- I'm happy that you like our poems, Eric :) - Many thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/12/2016 1:19:00 PM

Your pen Anne lise sang beautiful in this a pleasure Co writing with you dear friend wishing you a blessed weekend pal

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/12/2016 1:22:00 PM

- A pleasure to write with you - Thank you my friend, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/12/2016 12:48:00 PM

Hi Anne- Lise n' Liam !:))Wow!!Wow!This is a very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each! Wishing you a very lovely weekend and a Very Happy And Beautiful Valentine's Day too!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/12/2016 1:00:00 PM

- Thanks for the lovely visit a 7 and comments, Dorian - Best wishes for a romantic Valentine Day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)