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A little bird on the branch set Listen how nice its twittering Beautiful tones from a small orifice What do you want to tell me my little friend? The little bird has a secret to tell In the large oak tree down the hill it has built its new and sheltered nest And the greatest of all for this little mother in the nest there is two small light blue eggs waiting for protection and warmth from their mother 23.03.2012 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 11/15/2014 10:32:00 AM
OLD IS GOLD THEY SAYxxxrajat
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Date: 11/15/2014 12:05:00 PM
- But "gold" shine a little more with brushing it :) - Rajat, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/15/2014 10:31:00 AM
Most beautiful secret in the world. Love Anne Lise for this write. You wrote it almost three years ago. You are always great.XXXXX rajat
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Date: 11/15/2014 12:07:00 PM
- Time goes by so fast ..... more new spring secrets will come :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/4/2012 12:00:00 PM
a memorable moment from the living canvas of nature with a poetic touch .wonderful and magical .thank you for sharing .jk
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Date: 6/4/2012 12:05:00 PM
jk. - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 5/1/2012 4:07:00 AM
A sweet little story here. Huggs TLee
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Date: 5/1/2012 5:16:00 AM
Terry, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/7/2012 6:22:00 PM
Upon the branches, of this old Oak tree. Are eggs for tomorrow, they'll hatch wait and see. And when they hatch, like their ancestors before. We can only marvel, at Mother Nature, amour. Happy Easter Anne Lise, thank you for liking my humble writes :) xx
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Date: 4/8/2012 3:43:00 AM
Thank you James for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/1/2012 5:45:00 AM
This is really cute. These are the free gifts that God gave to us. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 4/7/2012 2:28:00 PM
Lucilla, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/27/2012 2:56:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise - Like the way you described the story of this mother bird confiding in you. Great title! Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poems. - Gail
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Date: 3/27/2012 2:58:00 PM
Gail, thank you for the time to read and comments mine poem. - :) oxox Anne-Lise
Date: 3/25/2012 7:52:00 PM
aaawww, that's lovely anne. a secret that's worth telling ;)
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Date: 3/26/2012 1:54:00 AM
Mia, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/24/2012 4:14:00 PM
a cute little thought a neat poem on that,thnx for your sweet visit, jag
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Date: 3/25/2012 1:13:00 PM
jag, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/24/2012 2:58:00 PM
A beautiful poem. You have an aroused sensitivity and charming heart.Thanks for your profound comments on my poem The Wound, Anne. you are so kind. -Mohammad
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Date: 3/25/2012 1:12:00 PM
Mohammad, thank you for visit and comments my poem.- oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/24/2012 2:07:00 PM
This is an extraordinary poem, Anne Lise! I feel as tho I have been read to from an ancient fairy tale book when I read this rhyme! You did great with each and every line...Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 3/24/2012 2:12:00 PM
Gwen thank you for visit and comments my poem. Rhyme??? - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/24/2012 1:39:00 PM
another delight from you, anne lise... enjoyed the whole spring mood and imagery of this one..:) huggs!
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Date: 3/24/2012 1:46:00 PM
Nette, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/24/2012 12:42:00 PM
good thing other animals didn't find the bird's secret stash! also, thanks for your comments on my poems :)
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Date: 3/24/2012 1:45:00 PM
Susan, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/24/2012 10:10:00 AM
thank you for your kind words to my wife on her poem . she is able to read with me tonite and has enjoyed your words very much. wishing you the very best. Ron.
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Date: 3/24/2012 1:44:00 PM
L-M & Ron, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/24/2012 9:12:00 AM
wonderful pictures one sees when reading this Anne-Lise, enjoyed. harry
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Date: 3/24/2012 9:24:00 AM
Harry, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/24/2012 8:56:00 AM
stunning write wonder if it was blur jay eggs in that nest or robins we have a mother robin that comes each year and nest b/t the pines outside our window boy those chicks can eat lol great imagery and play on words here also thanks for the warm comment on my poem free bird keep up the great writing enjoyed the read
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Date: 3/24/2012 9:00:00 AM
Katherine, thank you for visit and sweet comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/24/2012 8:17:00 AM
what a lovely piece, Anne Lise
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Date: 3/24/2012 8:39:00 AM
jack, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/24/2012 1:05:00 AM
This is really a sweet write, Anne Lise :) I really enjoyed reading and taking a peek into mama bird and her little blue eggs :D
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Date: 3/24/2012 8:38:00 AM
nikko, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/23/2012 11:26:00 PM
Another effortless string to your cultured bow! This is strongly beautiful. Love this and please write on.
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Date: 3/24/2012 8:37:00 AM
Thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/23/2012 8:34:00 PM
A beautiful picture in this write, Anne Lise! I have birds nesting in my tree outside. I love spring. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/24/2012 8:37:00 AM
Rhonda, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/23/2012 7:51:00 PM
A lovely scene you have written, Anne Lise. Thank you for your sweet comments on my poems. Love, Kim
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Date: 3/24/2012 8:36:00 AM
Kim, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/23/2012 3:58:00 PM
Beautiful!!!!!! and my dear friend, do share a cup with me... Spoon reach from Norway to New York...luv Michael
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Date: 3/24/2012 8:35:00 AM
Michael, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/23/2012 2:54:00 PM
What a lovely description of the birds and their nest, Anne Lise. Because the eggs were blue, I'm wondering if these were robins. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/24/2012 8:34:00 AM
Carolyn, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/23/2012 1:40:00 PM
Great spring story told in this work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Thanks for the kind review of my work..It was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 3/24/2012 8:32:00 AM
Sara, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 3/23/2012 1:13:00 PM
very nice indeed...seems like spring is still in our heart. This poem kinda reminds me of my mom who is always so protective even though I'm 28 now and we live in different countries!!!...but anyways Anne Lise thanks for sharing your work...enjoyed much...:)
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Date: 3/24/2012 8:31:00 AM
Jonas, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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