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- Almost In the Kingdom of Heaven -

I found you there an early morning The shimmering rays update nature So everything in the park would be pink and yellow From spray smell of honeysuckle With full water among the rocks in churned Regardless of where we can explore the passion of love Sitting in shade of trees In a moment my path deviate 08.30.2015 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/7/2015 11:51:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poem this morning. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/7/2015 11:56:00 AM

- Thank you for comments and visits, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/4/2015 11:18:00 AM

Refreshing imagery, Anne. All senses are truly alive in such moment. Good luck! hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/4/2015 11:33:00 AM

- I have deleted it from contest - Thank you for comments and visits, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/2/2015 6:05:00 AM

truly powerful piece it captured the sense of touch anne lise excellent pen dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2015 2:00:00 PM

- A great honor that you like it, dear friend Liam :) - Thank you for comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan

Date: 9/1/2015 7:29:00 PM

This is so lovely Anne Lise, if we haven't got senses we haven't got anything, so well written, take care my friend...........Vera..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2015 2:59:00 AM

- Dear Vera, a great honor that you like it :) - Thank you for comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/1/2015 3:34:00 PM

This is lovely.....serene and romantic, Anne Lise! You mesmerize with sensual imagery! gl in the contest. Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2015 3:00:00 AM

- Paul, I thank you for comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/1/2015 3:23:00 PM

Hello Anne... Wonderful write ...best wishes in the contest.... Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/2/2015 3:00:00 AM

- Thank you for comments and visits, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Neva Romaine

Date: 9/1/2015 1:42:00 PM

Hey Anne Lise, stopped by for a visit. Such a beautiful work of art on the subject of love. This is like soft petals and sweet emotion. Beautiful in expression. Best wishes in the contest! Be Blessed, Neva

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2015 2:20:00 PM

- Neva, I thank you for comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2015 4:59:00 PM

An unexpected twist at the end made it wow..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2015 3:59:00 AM

- A great honor that you like it, Sara :) - Thank you for comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Allie Rosenthal

Date: 8/31/2015 1:38:00 PM

this made me smile! beautiful!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2015 3:58:00 AM

- Thank you for your smile and comments, Allie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 8/31/2015 12:26:00 PM

Beautiful pen Anne Lise! Very nice and peaceful piece, you've penned here my dear friend:)A 7!Sending you love n prayers!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)Hugs!D

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2015 4:00:00 AM

- Thank you for comments and visits, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 8/31/2015 5:31:00 AM

Lovely. Reads like a winner:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/1/2015 3:56:00 AM

- Thank you for your words, Njeri ...... but, a "winner" poems? ..... No, my poems are not high on the list .... I participate for fun :) - But a great honor that you like it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda

Date: 8/30/2015 8:23:00 PM

Beautifully serene write Anne-Lise. I love the smell of Honeysuckle... pink and yellow and the water churning amongst the rocks.. such a perfect read... love as always ~~X~~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2015 2:41:00 AM

- Glad you like it, Kim :) - Thank you for comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/30/2015 6:18:00 PM

A beautiful day in the park.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2015 2:41:00 AM

- Thank you for comments and visits,Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 8/30/2015 2:10:00 PM

Anne-Lise, such a L O V E L Y scene you have penned and thanks for visiting my poem, God told me ~~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2015 2:49:00 PM

- Thank you for comments and visits, B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/30/2015 1:48:00 PM

Anne Lise, l enjoyed reading this beautiful piece.It was soooo romantic! Best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2015 2:01:00 PM

- Glad you like it, Alexis :) - Thank you for comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/30/2015 10:18:00 AM

The imagery is beautiful and romantic Anne lise - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2015 1:16:00 PM

- Thank you for comments and visits, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/30/2015 10:12:00 AM

the suns touch is a priceless picture....Beautifying everything in our natural mixture....every leaf, every branch, every single blade of grass....anne, your words conjure the happiest moments of the past....;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2015 1:16:00 PM

- Thank you for comments and visits, Eric - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/30/2015 9:05:00 AM

Dreamy and ecstatic, dear Anne-Lise, a seven!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2015 1:15:00 PM

- Thank you for comments a 7 and visits, Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)