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' Scissor '

~*~ =========================== raven, lush, sleek skein three-inched lengthy mane spawned fluke - halcyon shimmer in months sweet relish crave to embellish vanished bubbles - I wither. gripping the scissor I am in dither LOVE gave me the axe - slayed me chose to cut this crown to erase this frown "NEW ME" nestling ... no glee. ~*~ ====================================== *-* jun-jun villanueva *-* "ALOUTTE YOUR CLEANSING RITE" Contest

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Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/7/2011 10:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the "ALOUTTE YOUR CLEANSING RITE" poetry contest sponsored by nette onclaud. CR

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/6/2011 6:07:00 PM

Contratulations on the win in the contest,jun-jun

Tony Lane

Date: 9/6/2011 1:00:00 PM

congradulations in a contest. Tony

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/6/2011 11:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Nette's contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/6/2011 12:25:00 AM

Jun-jun this is a great poem, so enjoyed. Congratulations on your win. Love Lee

John Freeman

Date: 9/5/2011 10:54:00 PM

Congratulations Jun on your fine poetry's win. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/5/2011 9:13:00 PM

We all need a "NEW ME" from time to time....however we can find it....via a dither with the scissors or some other way! Love this thought!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2011 6:05:00 PM

CONGRATS JUN-JUN ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN IN ALOUETTE WITH THIS TERRIFIC WRITE MY FRIEND.. AWESOME AS ALWAYS... SUPERBLY CRAFTED FOR CONTEST...LUV..

Nancy Jones

Date: 9/5/2011 4:50:00 PM

Yay jun-jun! well deserved! ~N

Jack Horne

Date: 9/5/2011 3:55:00 PM

Many congrats on all your wins, Junjun : )

David Williams

Date: 9/5/2011 3:24:00 PM

jun-jun congrats on your wonderful win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2011 8:47:00 AM

So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading this morning of both seasoned poets and new poets. I am happy I was able to read your poetry today Jun-Jun. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/29/2011 11:03:00 PM

wow! what a glee... enjoyed,,, how are you?? here to say hi and read a few poems,..p.d.

Nancy Jones

Date: 8/29/2011 9:31:00 PM

my sister once told me (after I'd had 10 inches or so chopped off) that when native american women went into warrior mode, they cut their hair short.... love this write, jun-jun, it recalled that to me. namaste ~n