" Sara "

1 " Very thought Provoking " " Am I too old to " ( give ) " help? ( Sara Kendrick ) ( " MIATIANNA " ) 2 Rebirth and rebuild In the Square , the music Speaks Honoring : the Dead ( HG ) Dedicated to the ( "Flowing Pen" ) " Sara Kendrick " Author's Note : The First two Lines of the First Senryu are Sara's Words In a Comment on my POEM " MIATIANNA " The Second Senryu is my Response

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/10/2010 5:18:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful tribute to my mom. I bet her head is swelling. I am up today because I have to get my son ready for school and I also had a bad dream that woke me at 5am and then the wind was about to blow the house down. LOL God was trying to keep me from gettig stiff this am.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/2/2010 3:41:00 AM

Thanks for the honor and tribute --a poem with my name. I'll have to read all your honor poems. Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/30/2010 10:33:00 PM

Hati was a horrible disaster... These senryu are an imaginative interactive way to handle your thoughts. Very nice. (Did you ever notice that I have reposted Elephant Dandruff for you. I used to cull out poems when I had written a hundred leaving only contest and featured poems... That is why you were unable to find it.) Love to you. Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2010 5:23:00 PM

I love your response here! These all make mine look quite dull. haha

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/30/2010 3:08:00 AM

Sara Kendrick,a sensitive person,a mother to all,She can help with prayers,we can help with donations and stuff,,and i love your response to Her indeed..Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/29/2010 9:59:00 PM

None of us are too old to offer help, HG. And your poem Miatianna inspired all of us to do everything we can, even if our help is limited to prayers. Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

Date: 1/29/2010 9:00:00 PM

The Flowing Pen has been very creative today, your soul is limitless in creating...Raul