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- Priceless Jewel Illuminates -

Dazzling starlight smile a reason for existence replays Exploding breathless within the mind I am just following the heart Holding inside a vision One rose warm flickering candle Time alone dreams walking along beaches looking across oceans Silent kiss dew of the night lost at sea Listening to waves crash as the seagulls cry to feel the wind through our hair capturing currents deeply move Wishing to share a good movie scene especially if the story line's gripping Enriched with beauty and gentle tranquility when two souls completely unite hotly Like a never ending fire through the night Sparks will ignite a fireworks of loving grace A life with love filled hope Holding hands burning inside chambers warm joy To melt freely into arms holding deep beauty shines Hold me tightly in your loving strong embrace never let us part ways ever Each passing moon you become a superstar gleam A world becomes nothing if our dreams whisper away slowly As this ocean inside deeply crawls looking up with the head inside clouds Destiny howls awaiting fates taste sealed with the forever lingering kiss Mystically enchanting a princess enters through chambers gate a warm welcoming guest As passion pervades into the moonlit night darkness tastes from the light Sparkling one golden sunbeam a key turns with you Growing stronger every waking day The future is so brightly lit an adventure opens scroll Unwinding steps forward precious There will be more moments like this from the treasure chest of life Priceless jewel illuminates Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid A Collaborated Poem 26.10.2015

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Date: 11/2/2015 4:13:00 AM
Such synchronized pens, Anne. Another jewel has been crafted beautifully. 7. Have a great week! huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/3/2015 3:25:00 AM
- Kim, thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/31/2015 2:41:00 PM
A very magical story here Anne, Beautifully written with lot's of passion, reminded me of some distant fairy tale!!! Good collaboration Best wishes Kevin
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Date: 11/3/2015 3:24:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Kevin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/29/2015 5:44:00 PM
Creative collaboration..I enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit to my p age..I still long for the seven layer fudge cake but know that I would eat too much if I made one..Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2015 4:56:00 AM
- You can enjoy the smell ..... and send them to me :))) - Sara, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/28/2015 12:29:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Romantic passionate write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2015 5:16:00 AM
- Ravi, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2015 10:49:00 AM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise and Liam!! Another powerful, passionate, and mystical write which is nothing less than Outstanding. Each of the seven stanzas build on and blend in with each other to form a sparkling mosaic of hope and love as one journeys toward the "chest of life" in which the "priceless jewel illuminates." A "7" + "FAV" for sure. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2015 5:15:00 AM
- Glad you liked this write, dear friend Gary - Thanks for the nice visit a 7+ Fav. and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2015 10:15:00 AM
Each verse a spark of beauty that ignites the soul which erupts in a phantasmagoric display of bliss! A seven for each of you, dear friends, Anne-Lise and Liam!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2015 5:14:00 AM
- Dear Demetrios, thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2015 7:31:00 AM
Descriptive and flowing freely sweet Anne Lise and Liam... =`) hugs! ~Olive Eloisa
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2015 5:13:00 AM
- Olive, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2015 5:10:00 AM
Floats like a silk scarf in the breeze, Anne-Lise, a lovely write. Viv x
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Date: 10/28/2015 5:10:00 AM
- Viv, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2015 12:48:00 AM
The Poem has captured beautifully the mood of the Nature with rising thoughts and feelings of the engaged lovers. Brilliant collaboration of yours with Liam Mc Daid. A full 7 Anne for this sweet romantic poem and thank you once again for your words on my today's Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2015 5:09:00 AM
- Glad you liked this write, Ravindra - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2015 2:48:00 PM
This is has to be one of the greatest collabs ever! I love the vivid imagery and the romanticism. So passionate and directly from the heart. I enjoyed reading it from top to bottom! +7
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Date: 10/26/2015 3:36:00 PM
- Thank you for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Elis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2015 1:46:00 PM
Simply beautiful guys...a key turns with you...love that line
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2015 5:12:00 AM
- Thanks Tim for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2015 12:45:00 PM
Great write, Anne Lise! Loved your imagery.
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Date: 10/28/2015 5:12:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Thomas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2015 9:47:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise n' Liam! Another very beautiful, romantic passionate, and captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written! I truly enjoy it.A true golden gem!Just awesome!A most beautiful dreamy sweet romantic love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful and sweet.Very enchanting!Just wonderful!I just love it!Excellent imagery!Just superb!Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++ to each!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2015 2:15:00 PM
- Thanks for the beautiful bouquet of lovely words and a 7, dear Dorian :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2015 9:44:00 AM
also thank you dear friends for the truly heartfelt beautiful comments wishing you both a blessed week filled with happiness
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Date: 10/26/2015 9:42:00 AM
your words anne lise danced this to a whole new level always a pleasure sharing pens with you deeply appreciated dear friend wishing you a blessed beautiful week filled with warm smiles
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2015 2:13:00 PM
- Thanks for the beautiful poem, dear friend Liam :) -Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2015 9:34:00 AM
You and Liam are really in sinc. Another exceptional write!
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Date: 10/26/2015 2:12:00 PM
- Thanks for the beautiful words and lovely visit, Richard - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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