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- New Life Awakens -

With a loving heart, filled with peace and harmony In the afterbirth new life emerges An eternal optimist in Spite of living Starlight sparkles in this globe softly glistens Everything seems to be perfectly normal Gentle spirit refines where the thought is good Dream you shine a warm sunbeam gift We live for truth and justice sake The numbered days and duration of happy feelings A glimpses of human life takes shape Golden delicious fruit of Eden Happiness can not be conquered, it must be openly received A sun melting inside warm thoughts Staring across the horizon clouds pearl white My desires, my needs, my happiness As fallen people with meaningless deeds Dreamy cotton skies echo into one song The ability to grasp facts of nature around us Faraway mountains sailing yearns Over the hills a warm thought in breeze blows Starlight twinkles in the eyes of a dream Coasting along on a deep blue sea wave kiss Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 25.08.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 9/5/2015 12:46:00 AM
:) Oh Ian....you two are such romantics. Sunshine and you work well together. So many of these lines just really have fantastic imagery....I won't pick and choose...just beautiful. Congrats on POTD, dear. :) Hugs
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Date: 9/4/2015 11:21:00 PM
Ian, congratulations on poem of the day with this beautifully penned poem by both of you and Anne-Lise ~~
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Date: 9/4/2015 8:21:00 PM
Congrats on POTD, makes me want to travel there!! (where ever there is ) :)
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Date: 9/4/2015 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD Liam and Anne-Lise!! An extraordinary poem for sure by two very talented writers who I'm blessed to call my friends. This one is quite uplifting with the wonderful message it sends to the reader. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 9/4/2015 4:44:00 PM
Another worthy offering from two capable pens, Liam & Anne Lise! Happiness comes to those with a sincere and open heart. Congrats on POTD. // paul
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Date: 9/4/2015 1:35:00 PM
Congrats on another magnificent write you two! :-)
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Date: 9/4/2015 1:01:00 PM
a positive approach. well done
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Date: 9/4/2015 12:25:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne-Lise!Wow!Congratulations to you both on POTD!A very beautiful love poem collaboration between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!Perfectly done!A 7 to each + Fav!Just awesome!I'm so very happy for you both:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 9/4/2015 9:55:00 AM
Congrats, Liam and Anne on having another of your lovely collab work chosen as POTD! hugs!
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Date: 9/4/2015 9:50:00 AM
Hey Liam, BIG congratulations on your poem being chosen for POTD! A beautiful expression from you and Anne Lise. Great collaboration. Well deserving! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 9/4/2015 8:46:00 AM
Congratulation on poem of the day hugs Eve
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Date: 9/4/2015 6:24:00 AM
- Congratulations with P.O.T.D. !!!!!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/4/2015 5:39:00 AM
What a beautiful scene this would make in a movie. I FEEL the imagery, so subtle yet so vivid.
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Date: 9/3/2015 10:06:00 AM
Liam and Anne Lise with every poem your are making you place me a trip to the cosmos and beyond!!! awesome!~Olive Eloisa grats to you!
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Date: 9/2/2015 4:40:00 PM
- Always a pleasure to write beautiful poems with you - thanks dear friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/2/2015 9:35:00 AM
:) I read this on Sunshine's page. I'm here to tell you that I've enjoyed the lovely imagery in this. :) Good one, Liam. God bless, dear. Hugs
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Date: 9/2/2015 8:04:00 AM
Every collaboration of yours ends up in a masterpiece! A seven to each, dear Liam and dear Anne-Lise!
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Date: 9/2/2015 7:52:00 AM
Hi Liam n' Anne Lise!A most beautiful, captivating love poem you've penned here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!I truly enjoyed it.A very beautiful dreamy sweet romantic piece to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Excellent piece!Very enchanting.So very beautifully written.I love it!Just awesome.Great imagery!Wonderful collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 to each + Fav!Keep your faith Liam!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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