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- More Than Grace Dream Weaver -

Oh precious noble sunrise gift Collecting small pieces of mosaic to a beautiful love You're my majestic rose whom blossoms deeply splendid Flowering a Princess young and lightly blushing regal sovereign Take me with you into dreams of royal splendor where your grace pours upon lips divine honey Please don't make me dream lonely or pine away It would be the beginning to a warm happiness true lovers should feel Where we will hold each other in silent whispers Starlight wonder dances on a stream of silver dust And the moon's loving energy promotes the Divine Magically you raise me up enchantingly songs A heavenly choir bringing the stars into the soul Inside your Heaven we will fly together free As the sunflower we turn our minds toward the light Becoming one spouse with the perfect pure love Into another space I feel you all around me Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 22.07.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/27/2015 5:39:00 PM

I guess Andrea is right and used to get comments but no longer do. Anyway nice piece by the two of you. Trying to catch up on some comments as I am way behind again. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2015 2:56:00 AM

- Always a pleasure to see you dear Phyllis - Thank you for a lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2015 10:24:00 PM

this is beautiful. By the way, it makes mention of "spouse" and I seem to remember you had one here. What happened to him, Anne? I never see him here.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2015 2:53:00 AM

- He got enough of the soup ...... too much salt - Thanks for the visit and comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/24/2015 5:15:00 PM

A wonderful write, so beautiful and excellence.............A.M.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2015 11:25:00 AM

- Thanks for the visit and comments, Afolabi :) - A pleasure to share with you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/24/2015 2:46:00 PM

An excellent beauty treasured with heartfelt love, my lovely lovely friend. 7+ i feel. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2015 11:25:00 AM

- A pleasure to share with all my friends, dear Bl - Thank you for a lovely comments and a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/24/2015 10:43:00 AM

Beautiful verse, Anne-Lise & L. McKaid. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2015 2:37:00 PM

- A pleasure to share with you, Eve :) - Thank you for visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/24/2015 8:34:00 AM

Anne -Lise, this is wonderful collaboration, I enjoyed it very much:-) Aexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2015 8:48:00 AM

- Alexis, thanks for the visit and comments on our poems : - More Than Grace Dream Weaver - Happy weekend :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/24/2015 8:05:00 AM

A beautiful collaboration Anne Lise, absolutely love it :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2015 8:25:00 AM

- Thanks for the visit and comments, Wilma - A pleasure to share with you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/23/2015 10:50:00 PM

Anne Lise my friend, various poetical devices used in extreme beauty!!! love the 2nd and 3rd!!!magic and enchanting!! ~Olive Eloisa =')

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2015 3:11:00 AM

- Olive, thanks for the visit and comments on our poems : - More Than Grace Dream Weaver - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/23/2015 2:22:00 PM

A wonderful collab my friends! Magical and mystic embracing of words and message. A7 but surely a ten on any other scale...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/24/2015 3:09:00 AM

- Robert, thanks for the visit a 7 and comments on our poems : - More Than Grace Dream Weaver - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/23/2015 12:54:00 PM

Lovely thoughts, dear Anne. Your writes with Liam are always "feel good", the kind that makes our day brighter. Thank you, both. PS. I saw Leonora's comment so let me also wish you a "Happy Biurthday, Anne-Lise! hugs and smiles!:-)))

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2015 1:00:00 PM

- Kim, thanks for visiting and lovely comments at Liams and my poem - And even more thanks for sweet B- day greeting! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/23/2015 12:34:00 PM

You are a couple blessed by poetry, dear Anne-Lise and dear Liam! Your works make the muse of poetry joyous as it makes me happy! Congratulations to both and a 7 to both!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2015 12:39:00 PM

- Your comments mean a lot, my friend Demetrios - Thanks for the visit a 7 - A pleasure to share with you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 7/23/2015 11:37:00 AM

This collab poem is extremely beautiful my dear friend, Anne Lise and Liam. Hugging this superb write tightly and you, two. Thank you so much for sharing! Stopping by to thank you also for the lovely comments on my poem/s and especially to greet you a Very Happy Birthday today! Best Wishes to You my dear friend! I've posted a simple gift for you, A Birthday Blog. I hope you'll like it. Simple but sincerely came from the bottom of my heart. love lots and biggest bday hug, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2015 11:48:00 AM

- I think you're the most beautiful human on earth dear Leonora !!!!! - Every year, you remember my birthday !!! - Always with a smile - always with beautiful words - Always from your heart - Every year, you make me very happy - if I had really long arms, I would give you the world's biggest hugs - Thank you my dear friend LEONORA !!!! - Love you, as my nearest friend ..... even though you are too far away - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 7/23/2015 4:37:00 AM

thank you everyone for the heartfelt very beautiful comments wishing you all a lovely weekend

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 7/23/2015 4:35:00 AM

passing you a warm smile anne lise thank you kindly for joining pens with me always you paint beautiful wishing you a blessed weekend dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2015 8:03:00 AM

- As always a pleasure, my dear friend Liam - I wish you a lovely weekend - Best wishes // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/23/2015 2:56:00 AM

Hello Anne-Lise and Liam!! I see another one of your wonderful free verse specialties has made it to post here. This is a superb write sprinkled with divine imagery. Most Excellent indeed. "TR" + "FAV"!! (Be sure to check out my latest post today: "The Warmth of Our True Love," which is a Terzanelle that I recently wrote. I think you guys will enjoy it!) Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2015 8:05:00 AM

- Gary, thank you for the beautiful words - Your comments mean a lot - Especially thanks for a 7 and fav. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/23/2015 1:21:00 AM

Beautiful poem. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. TFS

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2015 8:06:00 AM

- Ravi, thanks for the visit and comments on our poems : - More Than Grace Dream Weaver - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/22/2015 4:51:00 PM

what a heavenly collaboration Anne Lise and Liam:-) hugs Jan xx 7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2015 7:40:00 AM

- Thanks for the visit a 7 and comments on our poems, dear Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 7/22/2015 4:43:00 PM

So lovely A-L and Liam....a7 Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/23/2015 7:39:00 AM

- Tim, thanks for the visit and comments on our poems : - More Than Grace Dream Weaver - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 7/22/2015 3:20:00 PM

Hi Liam n' Anne Lise!Another very beautiful and enchanting dreamy love poem penned by you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written!Just dazzling!A real gem!I love it.A very beautiful captivating passionate and romantic sweet piece to be held very close to my heart.smiling.I truly enjoyed it!So very beautiful!Great imagery!Fantastic collaboration!Just awesome!A 7+++ to each!A fav!Your pens are truly mighty golden!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!Keep your faith Liam.In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2015 4:05:00 PM

- Dorian, thanks for the visit and comments (can not see any "fav") - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/22/2015 3:17:00 PM

pure romanticism so charming in its essence.. fine collab, dear anne.. happy day!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2015 4:06:00 PM

- Nette, thanks for the visit and comments on our poems : - More Than Grace Dream Weaver - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Diane Christian

Date: 7/22/2015 2:51:00 PM

beautiful poem, its loving

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2015 4:07:00 PM

- Thanks for the visit and comments on our poems Diane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)