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I am sure you can hear me weep Autumn - I will let you sleep As you look death in the eye - through heavenly eyed I am with you always - sound of leaves falling silently - unimaginably tired Naked, forsaken cold and bleak Winter allows the soil and the plants sleep During the winter snow and dark gray cloud The rivers have been frozen - King Winter is proud I hear the birds playing my song Spring - throw winter clothes - it was not wrong Apple blossoms sprouts and clear blue sky This makes me so happy - wish I could fly Lightweight shoes and golden hair A smile on your face - so easy to care Summer is here - feet in the hot sand Flowers and butterflies ... oh ... I love my land 26.02.2014 A-L Andresen :)

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Date: 8/3/2014 12:52:00 PM
This is lovely. Makes me long for each season. Nice write.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/3/2014 12:55:00 PM
- Spring and summer are my favorites, Sarah - Thanks for the nice visit and comments. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/26/2014 7:02:00 AM
Rich, thought-provoking imagery makes this poem memorable. Yes, I like it. Bravo!
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Date: 7/26/2014 8:02:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Paul. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/17/2014 12:14:00 PM
Oh, summer. what a beautiful time of year. Creates a great playground. I know how you feel Anne Lise. Liked it a lot.... Robert.
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Date: 6/18/2014 3:38:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Robert - Have a great day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/10/2014 6:23:00 PM
I really liked how you began your poem with autumn and ended it with summer. Great rhyme and beautiful imagery! A wonderful poem, Anne-Lise! Good luck in the contest!...Thank you very much for the kind comments. :)
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Date: 3/11/2014 3:53:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Kelly - Have a great day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/5/2014 12:58:00 PM
The seasons are wonderfully expressed in your rhyme. It reads like a winner - Connie
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/5/2014 1:24:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Connie - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/4/2014 1:35:00 PM
This beautiful and lovely, Anne! Wish you luck in the contest! Many thanks to you on your congratulatory comments on my contested works in the G.V's series. Thank you once more!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/4/2014 1:42:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Abdulhafeez - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/3/2014 10:06:00 PM
This is very lovely...does bring a smile to my face...so sweet Anne Lise..good luck in this contest
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Date: 3/4/2014 3:46:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Donna - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/1/2014 10:41:00 AM
This is beautiful and I enjoyed it greatly. I cant wait for Spring to arrive <3
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Date: 3/1/2014 10:59:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jay - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/1/2014 7:53:00 AM
You guy are anxious for spring and we cant wait for Autumn... its been a hot summer, lovely poem good luck in the competition :) take care love Jayne x
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/1/2014 8:05:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jayne - Have a great day .... Autumn is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/1/2014 2:33:00 AM
may the branches of spring lighten your day, anne.. it;s saturday; time to dance away!.. huggs
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Date: 3/1/2014 5:22:00 AM
- It's a beautiful Saturday :) - the sun shines!! - - - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/28/2014 8:49:00 PM
Hello Anne Lise ! Wonderful write here dear poet ! I have one thing I need to say.....were is my spring ? It is still freezing here in Pa., and there are two more winter blasts to come here ! Yikes ! *smiles* Have a wonderful weekend my friend.....much love, james
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Date: 3/1/2014 5:20:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, James - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/28/2014 4:11:00 PM
nearly here now Anne Lise twenty days to go a lovely poem symbolizing the seasons hugs
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Date: 3/1/2014 5:19:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Shadow - Have a great weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/28/2014 1:45:00 PM
that's a beautiful expressed poem,nice rhyming,I enjoyed reading it , God bless you, Hugs!Erich
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/28/2014 2:43:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Erich - Have a great weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/28/2014 10:48:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend
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Date: 2/28/2014 11:16:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Funom - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/28/2014 10:33:00 AM
Season's sensations captured by one inspirational pen in the hand of Anne-Lise. My best 7 chuck
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Date: 2/28/2014 11:15:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Chuck - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/28/2014 8:16:00 AM
Awesome as always Anne Lise-- you are such an inspirational to us all
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Date: 2/28/2014 11:15:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Kim - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/28/2014 8:07:00 AM
This is such a very lovely write my dear friend Anne Lise. A very wonderful image and feelings were expressed here. Embracing this poem & the poet as I was enjoying it thoroughly tonight. Thank you so much for sharing! Wish you a great wkend ahead! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/28/2014 11:15:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Leonora - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/28/2014 8:01:00 AM
Excellent beauty of land's memories. A very nicely adorned the memories of past. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my friend, bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/28/2014 11:14:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, bl. - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/28/2014 7:20:00 AM
More lovely, soothing images flowing from your pen.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/28/2014 7:29:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Monterey - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/28/2014 7:10:00 AM
Wow this is one of yor best poems i feel. Gorgeous in imagery, memories and rhyme scheme. Lovely to read u again. Tc.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/28/2014 7:28:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments,S.K. - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/27/2014 7:37:00 PM
Nicely penned Anne, I like this one.
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Date: 2/28/2014 2:56:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Ken - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/27/2014 2:35:00 PM
what a beautiful write : )
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Date: 2/28/2014 2:55:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jack - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/27/2014 10:29:00 AM
you fill each season with different flavors so delightful, anne... norway rules and so does this stunning write... happy springtime with huggs!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/27/2014 11:30:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Nette - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/27/2014 6:49:00 AM
a nice poem anne lise ! flowers and butterflies ...oh I love my land. loved this line!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 2/27/2014 6:51:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Shaista - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/27/2014 5:21:00 AM
:) I can envision you with the sun in your hair, Anne Lise. My favorite line? Spring- throw winter clothes...Yes. There is nothing as magical as the arrival of spring. You captured that beauty.
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Date: 2/27/2014 6:36:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Eileen - Have a great day .... spring is coming soon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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