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Its easy to become what you fear.. Could bring you down,or shift you into high gear Embrace the hope you see in others.. A neighborhood filled with loving sisters and brothers Love and care for eachothers.. Always a helping hand and some leftovers Smiling faces in the streets,children playing in paradise Come on over,check it out while we roll the dice.. June 29th 2012 Anne Lise & Arild Andresen * Collabration with my lovely hub Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 3/6/2013 10:44:00 PM
Love it Anne,,,, but I think this is not your Paradise poem, ? thank you Anne for always reading my words xoxo ;}
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2013 2:39:00 AM
Debbie, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox // love from Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/28/2012 12:17:00 PM
you write so well together : )
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Date: 8/28/2012 12:35:00 PM
Jack, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/3/2012 10:35:00 AM
A wonderful rhyme poem again about love. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 8/3/2012 10:38:00 AM
Leonora, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 7/25/2012 11:23:00 PM
Lovely collaboration Anne Lise - lovely message!
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Date: 7/26/2012 2:29:00 AM
Vicky, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 7/21/2012 1:13:00 PM
Oh! lovely atmosphere, well done. i too deserve the World so. Thanks......... for this wonderful poem of few words. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/21/2012 1:28:00 PM
bl. - thank you for visit and comments - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 7/9/2012 3:31:00 PM
Anne Lise & Arild....Lovely and moving write!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/10/2012 7:06:00 AM
Cecilia, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 7/8/2012 11:38:00 AM
Nice to do a collabration with your hub. Lucky you that he loves poetry. My husband would look at me like --are you nuts--anyway enjoyed the poem from both of you. We were talking about Norway and the beauty of the fiords the other day and it got me thinking of you and how beautiful some of your area would be. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/8/2012 1:35:00 PM
Phyllis, yes Norway is beautiful but cold.....welcome! Thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 7/2/2012 12:08:00 PM
this is beautiful.
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Date: 7/2/2012 12:36:00 PM
Tania, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 7/2/2012 2:32:00 AM
I love this Ann, fear is such a theif!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2012 2:33:00 AM
kerry, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 7/1/2012 10:47:00 PM
Wow! Look at you two! Is this your first collab? Very nice... And very uplifting.. Great job! :o)
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Date: 7/2/2012 1:47:00 AM
Dan, thank you for visit and comments. - Yes the first. - oxox f.e.f. love Anne-Lise
Date: 7/1/2012 12:21:00 PM
have a warm sunday even if it's cold, anne!...huggs to you!..:)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/1/2012 12:24:00 PM
It is cold !!!! (comming) - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 7/1/2012 5:49:00 AM
Anne Lise & Arild....well done! I agree! I always cook xtra food to share!!! God Save Norway! (We have mucho citizens of Norwegian ancestry here in the great free state of Minnesota) jimbo
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Date: 7/1/2012 8:38:00 AM
Jimbo, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 6/30/2012 6:45:00 PM
sorry no crap games.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/1/2012 5:02:00 AM
T-S - thank you for visit. - oxox Anne-Lise
Date: 6/30/2012 4:49:00 PM
Yes, take care of each other. I love that! Thanks Anne-Lise. You always have wise words to say. I love it. Have a great weekend too. Love ya, Toquyen :))
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/30/2012 4:54:00 PM
Toquyen, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 6/30/2012 2:04:00 PM
I can relate to this poem on so many levels. It's so hard to be positive when all your living around is negative energy. I'm from a place where a smile can be your olny friend. Thanks for the smile Anne.
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Date: 6/30/2012 3:53:00 PM
Andre, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 6/30/2012 11:06:00 AM
some simple thoughts ,but very worthy in our day to day life .thank you for sharing .jk
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Date: 6/30/2012 11:10:00 AM
jk. - :) thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 6/30/2012 8:53:00 AM
Anne Lise - So happy! love, Kathy
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Date: 6/30/2012 10:10:00 AM
Kathryn, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 6/30/2012 7:21:00 AM
Lovely Anne. Great work and well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 6/30/2012 10:08:00 AM
Ravi, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 6/30/2012 6:12:00 AM
what an affectionate write from a pair ruled by wam love.. enticing me no end, anne and arild!...:) grreeeat job!.:) huggs!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/30/2012 6:14:00 AM
Nette, thank you for visit and sweet comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 6/30/2012 4:15:00 AM
dice it is indeed. ;-)
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Date: 6/30/2012 4:18:00 AM
G.G. - thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 6/30/2012 2:44:00 AM
A VERY LOVELY WRITE
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Date: 6/30/2012 2:49:00 AM
Jermaine,thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 6/30/2012 2:43:00 AM
collaboration in answer, my lady love and I, are both smiling from ear to ear. We thankyou, great poem.
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Date: 6/30/2012 2:48:00 AM
David, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox Anne-Lise
Date: 6/29/2012 9:35:00 PM
GREAT ENDING TO A LOVELY POEM!! AWESOME Anne Lise and Arild Anderson :-)
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Date: 6/30/2012 2:40:00 AM
Doreen, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 6/29/2012 7:38:00 PM
Some words and thoughts to considerthat help us to get along in this world. Hice one myfriend!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/30/2012 2:40:00 AM
Elizabeth, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 6/29/2012 5:58:00 PM
A lovely neighborhood. It gets so muggy here no one goes outside in the summer. i moss the playing children.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/30/2012 2:38:00 AM
Joann, thank you for visit and comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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