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- Just One Earth -

In a world with much violence Abuse and violence without control Sore screaming and bloody wounds Broken hearts and dreams Please take away my doubts Let the sound of pain subside Do not tear down the hope build up the truth Show mercy on our earth Let the children play on our green fields Reach out your hand and create bonds Live life in the spirit of love 25.09.2013 A-L Andresen :)

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Date: 12/4/2013 5:44:00 PM
We are all dreaming of that world,my dear Lise...keep on believing,one day it'll come :)..thanks for an inspiration to me,,one love_AiyaH :')
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Date: 12/5/2013 2:57:00 AM
- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you Aiyah. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2013 1:49:00 PM
I wish for the same world you do. Great poem. --Alex Roth
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Date: 11/16/2013 2:01:00 PM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Alex. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2013 7:06:00 PM
Beautiful piece from one end to the other. From turmoil to peace.
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Date: 10/27/2013 4:50:00 AM
- Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Vincent. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/20/2013 9:22:00 AM
Otherwise, these are the longings of the powerless, but you have given them strength through your words. Mark
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Date: 10/20/2013 9:33:00 AM
- Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Mark ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/7/2013 11:33:00 AM
You're good at saying exactily what needs to be said- getting right to the point! I like it Anne :)
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Date: 10/7/2013 11:38:00 AM
- Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Jacob! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/5/2013 11:08:00 AM
Thank you for this well wish for future earth.Very well penned....
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Date: 10/5/2013 11:51:00 AM
- Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Litan! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/4/2013 12:20:00 AM
Wish we all could think this way, we can save our earth
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Date: 10/4/2013 2:09:00 AM
- Thanks for your comments and your visit, Vandana. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/30/2013 8:10:00 AM
Just one earth is also my wish & prayer my dear friend Anne Lise. Your theme is well-expressed in you very beautiful and heartfelt poem. Hugging this tight. Thank you so much for sharing! By the way, thank you so much as well for your precious time to read my work and your very inspiring comments. Have a grace-filled & blessed day to you & your love ones. love lots & big big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 9/30/2013 11:18:00 AM
- Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Leonora ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/28/2013 10:45:00 AM
Simply amazing , best regards , C.S
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Date: 9/28/2013 11:16:00 AM
- Take good care of each other and our earth! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, C.S ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/28/2013 10:10:00 AM
may every day be earth day, anne... sure hope you enjoyed trukey... happy sunday!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/28/2013 10:27:00 AM
- I am home in Norway !!! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Nette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2013 6:11:00 PM
Amen Anne Lise....beautiful...thank you....
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Date: 9/27/2013 1:39:00 AM
- Take good care of each other and our earth! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Donna! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2013 6:05:00 PM
more like you in billions we need, to settle down the earth,, loving thoughts do come to naught but weeds , when hatred from it springs,... great poetry babe....
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Date: 9/27/2013 1:38:00 AM
- Take good care of each other and our earth! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Don ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2013 4:22:00 PM
Beautiful sentiments. Beautiful expressions. Beautiful poem. Guess what? Beautiful Anne Lise, love ya much! Cindy
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Date: 9/27/2013 1:37:00 AM
- Take good care of each other and our earth! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Cindy ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2013 3:39:00 PM
I have been ranting all day at these senseless disturbers of peace. We could jointly hurl curses at them, but thugs are hard of hearing! Powerful plea, though.
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Date: 9/26/2013 3:40:00 PM
- Take good care of each other and our earth! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Gerald ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2013 1:23:00 PM
If there is no hope at all - why does anyone bother to write anything, especially poetry or in my case attempt to do so? I hope, Anne Lise, that your hope will never be confounded. Peter. PETER DORR
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Date: 9/26/2013 2:30:00 PM
- We must never stop dreaming and hoping ..... live loses its meaning if we stop ...but, thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Peter ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2013 12:59:00 PM
LOVE indeed! <3 (o:
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Date: 9/26/2013 2:26:00 PM
- Take good care of each other and our earth! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Dan ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2013 12:31:00 PM
A very beautiful statement in this poem. This is a wonderful message that we all should learn from. Excellent writing, Anne-Lise!...Thank you for the kind comments, once again!
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Date: 9/26/2013 12:41:00 PM
Take good care of each other and our earth! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Kelly ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2013 9:17:00 AM
This is such a beautiful, such a bittersweet read it is so good! So touching to the heart, so true that it sparks a flame in my heart. It is a very creative write, and what a great title to use for this outstanding poem. Also thank you for reading my poem about midnight! Our poems are similar in diffrent ways. We both seek a new day, where everything can be at peace. No more blood, no more violence, Just peace and love all around. It is easier to love than to kill, so why do it! Great write xoxo
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Date: 9/26/2013 10:46:00 AM
- So true ! - Take good care of each other and our earth! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Chris ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2013 9:09:00 AM
This reads like a prayer that I too will say in my hour before sleep....It is so difficult to keep faith when day after day, the news is so grim. But we must keep the hope that good triumphs over evil.......I have to believe it ! A touching poem Anne-Lise
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Date: 9/26/2013 10:44:00 AM
- Take good care of each other and our earth! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Carrie ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2013 7:54:00 AM
You are the constant optimist. I suppose I'm the opposite. My wife says my glass is half-empty. Yours is half-full. I learned a new word from you this morning - jepp. I like it!... jack
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Date: 9/26/2013 8:00:00 AM
:)))) jepp!! - Take good care of each other and our earth! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Jack ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2013 7:54:00 AM
Great plea for those of earth who are intent on fulfilling desires of their own lust..Let there be peace..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/26/2013 8:01:00 AM
- Take good care of each other and our earth! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Sara ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2013 7:25:00 AM
"Blessed are the peace makers for they shall inherit the earth." thanks for being the first to post a comment on My Rainbow Symphony. If may not have been finished when you read it, have another look when you have a chance.
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Date: 9/26/2013 7:40:00 AM
- Take good care of each other and our earth! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Richard ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/25/2013 11:45:00 PM
in this world of uncertainty, your wonderful piece comforts me, dear anne..so beautifully done!.. may peace dwell within you.. hope you are now settled back home.. happy day with huggs.:)
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Date: 9/26/2013 5:37:00 AM
- Take good care of each other and our earth! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Nette ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/25/2013 8:56:00 PM
These thought are definitely necessary for these times my friend! I have enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/26/2013 5:37:00 AM
- Take good care of each other and our earth! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Russell ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/25/2013 5:13:00 PM
in the spirit of hope love excellent piece
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Date: 9/26/2013 5:36:00 AM
- Take good care of each other and our earth! - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem, Liam ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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