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' In Just a Glimpse '

" I open the door and cross the threshold of imagination " In the midst of woods A cryptic houri's crooning Euphony - suffused. Nocturnal deity humming her lyrical milieu Yarn of Utopian hymn of nostalgia Missing her sublime empyrean realm, now ... Place seems so eccentric ... strange ensued in just a flash How mind's eye brought this door to reach " LIMITLESS " Facing the Ingress of CHANGE Goddess of melody stepped and witnessed the other world behind the realm A cyan orb with burning effulgent daystar - mirrored, reflected Drawing up the facsimile of lustrous sparks of luminescence Planet surrounded by towering trees oscillating Dancing together with the blithesome rhythmic gust of cool breeze Nymphalid gliding, vagabonding with grace and elegance Bragging its chromatic stunning ala above the turfs embracing the land Rocks, pebbles, grass, insects and animals in harmony Clouds, birds, skies, heaven and earth in equilibrium Like music - heavenly, perfect, profound, and heartfelt Factual sanctuary - undisturbed habitat of existence Home of soothing silence - obscure, raw ... Goddess now a HUMAN Mortal - in time, will cease and die. . . =============================== *HAIKU **ACROSTIC ***FREE VERSE *-* jun-jun villanueva ~~~~~" THREE GEMS " contest~~~~~~ july 29,2011

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Date: 8/13/2011 4:04:00 PM
Please excuse hasty congrats - I'm posting before I got logged out again. Many congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 8/13/2011 9:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by Constance La France "Three Gems" Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2011 12:08:00 AM
jun jun, congrats for your win with this very well thought out poem. I can tell you put a lot of work into it. lUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/12/2011 6:25:00 PM
Chromatically stunning, jun-jun. A big ALA to to you!
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Date: 8/12/2011 11:52:00 AM
Congrats jun-jun on your amazing win with these brilliant lines of great expression luv..
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Date: 8/12/2011 11:26:00 AM
This poem is stunning, each gem stands alone, so beautifully! Congrats, jun-jun !!
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Date: 7/31/2011 9:54:00 AM
Soup Mail!!!!!!!!
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Date: 7/29/2011 9:52:00 PM
soupmail in a moment~~
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Date: 7/29/2011 2:11:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today Jun-Jun. It was a pleasure to read and I wish you the best in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend and keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol
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