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If I were an elephant : A dream will come true ~ a pink elephant I would be Ears so big, I could fly high into the clouds Explore the world and visit all my friends in many countries Do not be afraid ... I know it will feel like an earthquake when I make my visit The weight of an elephant is no joke - 08.12.2016 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) - Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 12/27/2016 5:23:00 AM
I like this funny little poem. I used to dream I could fly and it was wonderful! A pink elephant...sweet.
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Date: 12/27/2016 6:18:00 AM
- Continue with your dreams, Dane Ann ... fly free as a bird (or elephant :))) - Thank you for nice visit and lovely commenst :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/26/2016 7:47:00 AM
A cute elephant, indeed. I'm hopeful that you would visit me too, friend.
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Date: 12/26/2016 2:26:00 PM
- Thank you for nice visit and lovely commenst, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/25/2016 6:50:00 PM
This is one cute elephant poem~I'll know pinky has landed when I feel a magnitude 4.0 on the richer scale lol!:)
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Date: 12/26/2016 2:25:00 PM
- Thank you for nice visit and fun commenst, Cheryl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/11/2016 2:36:00 PM
Too Cute my friend. I do love elephants. They are such sensitive creatures and highly intelligent.So gentle to be so big. Wonderful. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/12/2016 4:30:00 PM
- Thank you so much, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/10/2016 12:21:00 PM
Elephants are such a blessing here on this earth. They are such intelligent and compassionate creatures. I love this! 7 ; )
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Date: 12/11/2016 11:21:00 AM
- Yes, they are wonderful animals Connie :) - Thank you for nice visit a 7 and lovely commenst - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/10/2016 11:30:00 AM
A flying elephant with an earthshaking landing. Happy landing, my friend..... Robert
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Date: 12/11/2016 11:20:00 AM
- Thank you Robert for nice visit and lovely commenst - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/10/2016 5:44:00 AM
Uplifting dear Anne-Lise, very imaginative especially when you give a Hug! I am back and feeling better!
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Date: 12/10/2016 7:21:00 AM
- Hugs are free :) - Welcome back, my friend :) - Thank you for nice visit and lovely commenst - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/9/2016 4:51:00 PM
Don't forget to pack your trunk!...Nice write Sunshine...
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Date: 12/10/2016 7:18:00 AM
- Champagne and a toothbrush needs no trunk, Joseph :) - Thank you for nice visit and lovely commenst - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/9/2016 4:38:00 PM
Cute one..Got a chuckle..Sara..Thanks for the visits..LOL..
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Date: 12/10/2016 7:19:00 AM
- Thank you Sara for nice visit and lovely commenst :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/9/2016 12:38:00 PM
ohh, you charm me with this lithesome work, anne.. don;t worry about the weight--elephants have big ears.. see you way up in the clouds!.. happy huggs
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Date: 12/9/2016 12:45:00 PM
- Yes big ears, but ... very big .... and even bigger ... such as wings :))) - I was on elephant safari a few years ago .... but those elephants could not fly :))) - hugs back, Nette // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/9/2016 9:55:00 AM
Haha... This is adorable. I love it, just put a smile on my face :)
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Date: 12/9/2016 11:57:00 AM
- Smile ... you have a beautiful smile, many thanks Akkina - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/9/2016 6:52:00 AM
I love pink Elephants! And champagne, too! Cute write, Sunshine! ...Fran
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Date: 12/9/2016 8:24:00 AM
- Then we're two about it :) - Thank you for nice visit and lovely commenst - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/9/2016 3:42:00 AM
Ha ha a lovely pink elephant poem x
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Date: 12/9/2016 8:27:00 AM
- Thank you for nice visit and lovely commenst, Wendy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/9/2016 12:03:00 AM
Ha ha, enjoyed this one, my friend:) a 7 for its cuteness:)
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Date: 12/9/2016 8:27:00 AM
- Thank you for nice visit a 7 and lovely commenst, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/8/2016 5:54:00 PM
haha, I liked that earthquake line. Hmmm, maybe I am already almost an elephant. heehee
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Date: 12/9/2016 8:27:00 AM
- Thank you for nice visit and lovely commenst, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/8/2016 3:18:00 PM
A very cute poem, Anne-Lise. Yeah, right. Don't be afraid if a big ole elephant plops down near you. Ha ha ha. I was laughing all the way on this charmingly delightful poem. Splendid poetry. Love and peace to you.
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Date: 12/9/2016 8:26:00 AM
- It will be "The Big Bang" !!! :))) - Thank you for nice visit and lovely commenst, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/8/2016 9:22:00 AM
This was cute and fun to read Anne-Lise. Sounds like the best thing to do if you were an elephant. Pink would look good on you. :)
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Date: 12/8/2016 12:32:00 PM
- I actually have pink sweater today ... but my weight can not be compared with an elephant ... happily :))) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Chris - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/8/2016 9:01:00 AM
I have my eye to the sky. In hopes that I will spy. A visit from you. Could it be true? The corn is as high as an elephant's eye? Thanks for smiles with my coffee! I'm ready for the earthquake;-). Huggalumps ~john
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Date: 12/8/2016 12:29:00 PM
- .... are coming soon ... hope you wear a helmet, John - Thanks for the great rhyming and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 12/8/2016 7:59:00 AM
Now they must be very rare indeed! A great poem, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 12/8/2016 8:14:00 AM
- A "poet" from Norway's rare here in Poetry Soup ... you will not find many active members with or without pink large ears :))) - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Rick - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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