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- I Had a Dream -

It was a cold winter night and the sky was full of beautiful stars I sat on a bench in the park to admire them I wish that I could count them but it is something we all know can not be done It is an impossible task I thought .... what if each star was my friend and they are not easy to find But you know that they are there for you I want to embrace all my stars and care for each and everyone of them 17022012 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/5/2014 5:57:00 AM

very beautiful picture painted in this excellent pen

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/5/2014 6:01:00 AM

- Liam, thank you for visit and comments my poem: - I Had A Dream - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 6/20/2013 1:05:00 AM

Oh, I love this, Anne-Lise. Yes, hugging all our friends, dear friend :). Have an awesome day!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2013 1:16:00 AM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Toquyen, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jeremy Martin

Date: 4/22/2013 4:14:00 PM

Your writing is so pure, Anne-Lise. 'I want to embrace all my stars.' Really, really lovely line, my favorite.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2013 1:05:00 AM

Jeremy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Summer Arthur

Date: 8/27/2012 10:41:00 PM

Simply...wonderful <3 I love clear, winter nights just staring up at the millions of stars, it's one of my favorite things in this world to look at; it sparks the mind to wonder <3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2012 3:20:00 AM

Summer, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Jayachandran Chakrapany

Date: 6/4/2012 12:08:00 PM

friends are like stars as they accompany not only in our happiness but in our worries too . brilliant imagination and nice concept .thank you for sharing .jk

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/4/2012 12:11:00 PM

jk. - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

John Lipari

Date: 5/2/2012 5:37:00 AM

If this is how you treat your friends, I would be honoured and count myself blessed to be amongst them!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/2/2012 5:39:00 AM

Sweet comments, thank you for visit John. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Debra Falgout

Date: 4/21/2012 9:40:00 PM

Beautiful outlook of the heavenly stars, just like friends they brighten our lives and always look out for us Love, Debra

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/22/2012 3:39:00 AM

Debra, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Miaim K.

Date: 4/14/2012 12:39:00 AM

Niceeee Anne =)) I like the idea so much, the metaphor of Friends & Stars =)) .. Keep it up :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2012 6:12:00 AM

Mia, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Len Gasun

Date: 3/24/2012 11:49:00 AM

You're really a great poet. I love it, Miss Anne.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/24/2012 1:39:00 PM

Leonora, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Mpho Leteng

Date: 3/21/2012 4:07:00 AM

SHORT AND NICELY WRITTEN

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2012 5:08:00 AM

Thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Gareth Stockwood

Date: 3/7/2012 5:06:00 AM

That was stunning really full of life and hope well done on this poem x Gareth

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/7/2012 5:08:00 AM

Thank you for reading and comments my poem Gareth. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/6/2012 2:45:00 PM

How marvelous. I have often stared up into the sky with almost similar thoughts. Great minds think alike, I suppose! I love how you incorporate your feelings into warm, sweet words. Well done! Always, Laura

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2012 2:51:00 PM

Agree with you Laura.Thank you for reading my Dream poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/1/2012 10:04:00 AM

I love your idea here, Anne Lise! I never thought of thinking of each star as a friend :) very nice and you sure made me see stars in a different way :) Really enjoyed this one and thank you for always dropping by my poems :D

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/1/2012 11:18:00 AM

Thank you nikko for reading my poem: I Had A Dream. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/26/2012 9:28:00 AM

Yes - Reach for the stars! Fine work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2012 12:23:00 PM

Matthew, thank you for reading my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Gail Debole

Date: 2/25/2012 4:53:00 PM

Love your poem...sharp imagery plus the way you express what is in your heart...thought provoking

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2012 7:39:00 AM

Thank you Gail for reading my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Barbara Stump

Date: 2/24/2012 5:38:00 PM

DEAR FRIEND,SUCH A WONDERFUL THOUGHT AND POEM, JUST STOPPED IN FOR A VISIT....THE POETESS/barbara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/26/2012 7:38:00 AM

Thank you Barbara for visit my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Judy Ball

Date: 2/24/2012 2:40:00 PM

Most of us love to watch the stars. I love the intricate patterns. Wonderful job here my friend. God Bless, JB

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/24/2012 2:47:00 PM

Thank you Judy for reading it. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Atisa Nicholas Sayuni

Date: 2/21/2012 10:40:00 AM

I like that reality behind it. It's just within my imagination. yea that's reality Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/21/2012 11:21:00 AM

Thank you Atisa for reading my poem today. - oxox Anne-Lise

Stenila Simon

Date: 2/20/2012 4:34:00 PM

Wow! This poem pictures one of my favorite sceneries- the starlit night sky! I love the way you want to "care for each and every one of them". It tells what a caring and supporting character you have! Thanks for sharing!-stenila

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/21/2012 1:29:00 AM

Thank you Stenila for reading my dream. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Daver Austin

Date: 2/20/2012 2:40:00 PM

I'll bet, as a child you did the "starlight, starbright" thing every night. I know I did. Love it. Love, daver

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/20/2012 3:15:00 PM

Tank you for reading my poem. - oxox Anne-Lise