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HIDDEN On mountain top none made a stop. Sublime solitude all around. Hard rigid rock stubborn block with wild glossy grasses and all dry feral masses prayed for noise and sound. Peak left abandoned No stone even turned Neither animals wandered nor birds ventured. Traces of human steps not found. Gentle breeze touching in gay, Sun greeting with bright ray can’t console rigid rock. It longed for sound to knock. Tiring monotony knew no bound. A team of mountaineers came to trek. Jubilant guys shout and break peace and calmness over all silence, prevailing perfect and profound. Cheerful guys played and wished to prolong danced in frolic mood, sang song screaming and clamor in joyful glamour. Noise of the crowd running too loud. Their laughter, yells yielded echo all around. Hard heart of rigid rock melted in pleasure discovering great glorious treasure, now exact time to measure. Instant responsive hidden echo in its surround 12/12/15 The Creative Collective Anthology Series Contest by Geraldine Taylor Re-edited on 02/15/20 Third Place Second Place ' "H"-Contest Old or New by Constance La France

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Date: 9/9/2021 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest, Anisha.
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Date: 9/8/2021 9:45:00 PM
Anisha, congratulations on your win in my "H" Contest, New or Old with your wonderful poem ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 7/5/2016 3:34:00 PM
Thank you for letting us climb with you!! What a wonderful view of the world through your poem !! Congratulations !
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Date: 7/4/2016 10:11:00 PM
Anisha, your poem came in 8th place in my contest. I don't know why the results came out the way they did... Happy 4th and Congratulations... check out my blog if you like. LINDA
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Date: 7/4/2016 9:37:00 PM
Congrats Anisha on the win.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/5/2016 7:17:00 PM
Thanks Tim
Date: 1/13/2016 11:14:00 PM
ANISHA, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/8/2016 7:43:00 PM
Anisha, CONGRATS on your Awesome win.... SKAT
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Date: 1/8/2016 10:01:00 AM
Fantastic poem Anisha, congrats on your win. From Jean
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Date: 1/7/2016 1:50:00 PM
Very Nice! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 12/13/2015 11:51:00 AM
Very nice Anisha, I love your interpretation of the contest theme.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/14/2015 11:50:00 AM
Thanks James for appreciation. Anisha D
Date: 12/13/2015 5:17:00 AM
All the best for the contest....great write
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/13/2015 9:52:00 AM
Thanks Sucheta for appreciation. You have the same title as mine. Where do you stay ? Anisha D

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