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The family had just moved into an old castle in Scotland; mother, father and their only daughter, Emmie, that they loved so deeply. Emmie was only 12 years old, and so innocent and beautiful. One night, she was woken up by a dripping sound; an echoing sound of water drops in a sink; rhythmic and terrifying. She sat on her bed, and suddenly appeared a free floating arc of strange light. It's that time of year again: Halloween night. Doors flew open and shut; strange voices and footsteps started. She was so frightened, that she almost threw up. Emmie made the sign of the cross, and plunged into a thicket of thorny wild roses. Terrified, excited and ready to run out of the house in 20 seconds, she overheard whispering words: "All beauty must die." The voice was so deathly, that it sent chills through her spine. It did not make it any better that it sounded too close to her ears. Her nightdress being torn by rose thorns like papers in a paper shredder, she ran as fast as she could; not back to the old castle, but away from the creepy voice, and strange events in the old castle. Exhausted, she searched for a place she could find rest "All beauty must die" the voice visited her unceremoniously once more. "What do you want from me? Is it wrong to be born beautiful? " she asked, wondering where she got her courage from. The energy to scream or run departed her, the moment she saw a woman dressed in white, levitating in the air, and moving towards her; a horrid face that carried the night's darkness, looked decayed, with worms crawling out from it. Remember this is a true story about Emmie; she gets chills just remembering the events of that night…… Contest: Halloween Co-Writes, By Diane Locksley Poem Written by: Teddy Kimathi and Anne-Lise Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/25/2017 11:11:00 AM
Now this is entirely different altogether. A different flavor to the other collaborations. Worth a read.
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Date: 11/23/2014 10:29:00 PM
Awesome as always Anne-Lise & Teddy . how are you. Haven't put any new ones up :) XXXx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2014 3:25:00 AM
- I check your poems from time to time, Debbie - Miss new poem from you :) - thanks for your lovely visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/11/2014 1:46:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this chilling story, once again. Wonderful work, Anne-Lise and Teddy! Congratulations to you both!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2014 7:17:00 AM
- Thanks for stopping by and congrats Kelly ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2014 3:57:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise...back to congratulate you both on your worthy showing in the contest; I too feel the same about "Honourable Mention", but that's how it is! // paul
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2014 2:54:00 AM
- We are on the winning list !!! - Thanks for stopping by and congrats Paul ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/5/2014 1:13:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise, I am really excited about our placement! It was great fun working out the piece with you! Thank you for accepting my request to collaborate with you! ^_^ <3 <3 Regards, Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/5/2014 7:00:00 AM
Lol. I don't like the "Honorable Mention" too. In fact, I feel some discomfort :-( Well, I like that collaboration too.... Thanks to internet, we can interact across vast distances! ^_^ <3
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2014 3:21:00 AM
- It is wonderful to be on the winning list ! - But I do not like the "Honorable Mention" it sounds as a "comfort place" - I am proud of our poem, a great work between Kenya and Norway !!!! - It was a pleasure to work with you Teddy :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/4/2014 8:01:00 PM
Congratulations to the two of you. I find your poem quite amazing
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Date: 11/5/2014 3:23:00 AM
- Thanks for stopping by and congrats Brenda ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/4/2014 1:56:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Anne Lise and Teddy:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/4/2014 2:34:00 PM
- H.M. a "comforting place" !!!! :)))) - Thank you Jan, from both Teddy and me - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2014 7:52:00 AM
narration brings on me a very eerie feeling. A dollop of repugnant images "...with worms crawling out from it." added to intensify the creepiness of the poems. This poem is very well-crafted. Truly, Anne-Lise, your skill, in this poem, befits a master. Bless. ----RAJAT
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2014 7:56:00 AM
- That were a lot of fine words in a small comment - Thank you, from both Teddy and me - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/21/2014 3:03:00 PM
Anne-Lise . . . A really great job here with this free verse write!! I think that you and Teddy have a scary one here. I like this write and gave you and Teddy a "7" here. Liam and I just happen to have a Halloween Co-Write in with Diane too. Our poem has some humor in it to a slight degree, which is a departure for me, since I usually have written some very dark heavy pieces in the past. It's all fun in the end anyway. Best of Luck in the contest!! Cheers and Spill Ink!! Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2014 3:14:00 AM
- I just read your and Liam's story: Creepy and well written! - Glad you liked Teddy and my suggestion - thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/19/2014 10:50:00 PM
Nice job, lots of thought.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/20/2014 11:15:00 AM
- Thank you for reading our Halloween poem, Joan :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/15/2014 9:27:00 AM
I got chills reading this. Very scary, your images make me shiver.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/15/2014 9:41:00 AM
- Glad you enjoyed it, Monterey - Thanks for the visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/14/2014 3:37:00 PM
... all beauty must die... yikes! That's definitely a creepy catch phrase. I wonder where this Lady in White came from... perhaps jealous of everyone else's beauty? Good Halloween narrative!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/15/2014 2:53:00 AM
- Thank you for reading our Halloween poem, Timothy :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/14/2014 12:36:00 AM
This poem was filled with suspenseful moments, leading up to a terrifying ending! I love those kinds of stories! Perfect for Halloween!.... This was a wonderful write for the contest. Good luck to you both!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2014 3:06:00 AM
- Glad you enjoyed it, Kelly - Thanks for the visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/13/2014 4:42:00 PM
Just my kind of stuff Anne Lise! I love all this ghosts, supernatural Halloween writings, be stories, poems, books, movies, reality ghost haunting shows my friend. ;) you name it. This is a a good ghost story I loved it! And taking place in an Scotland haunted castle even more scary. Give you a 7 my dear! Very entertaining read! Hugs! Love and light! ;) D.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/14/2014 3:06:00 AM
- Glad you enjoyed it, Dorian - Thanks for the visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/13/2014 9:19:00 AM
This is a very compelling horror story and poem composed by two very talented poets my dear friend Anne Lise. I enjoyed thoroughly the read. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/13/2014 11:46:00 AM
- Thank you for reading our Halloween poem dear friend Leonora :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/12/2014 7:54:00 PM
'good one for the season, Anne Lise. A clever idea to have that worm infested ghostly face saying those words about how beauty must die!! For sure!!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/13/2014 4:09:00 AM
- Enjoyable that you enjoy our Halloween poem, Andrea :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/12/2014 1:50:00 PM
a fine sunday to you as halloween approaches, anne.. huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/12/2014 1:55:00 PM
- I'm here! - huggs back :)))
Date: 10/12/2014 12:29:00 PM
Well done to both of you, Anne Lise & Teddy. You managed to create the right atmosphere for a scary tale; I would not want to fall into thorny wild roses! Beauty should be preserved and not eliminated. gl in the contest. /x/ paul
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/12/2014 12:35:00 PM
- Thank you for reading our Halloween poem - always nice to hear the experts comment my work - Glad you liked this,Paul :) - Thanks for the visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/12/2014 9:23:00 AM
WOW! It gave me the chills. I usually stay away from scary writes cause I'm a scardy cat! ;) Good luck in the contest!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/12/2014 11:29:00 AM
- Glad you enjoyed it, Eileen - Thanks for the visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/11/2014 10:52:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise and Teddy, you wove this tale wonderfully and the image of the ghostly woman pursuing Emmie is surely haunting. I did see a ghost once, but others in college saw the same one and it was not menacing. I'm a believer in spirits, so I hope Emmie breaks free of these terrifying visions. Surely a winner in Diane's contest. (She said she had a treat for the winners.) Wishing both of you success always! Love, Carolyn
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/11/2014 12:14:00 PM
- I'm a believer in spirits me too .... but, has not seen but heard and felt :) - Enjoyable that you enjoy our Halloween poem, Carolyn :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/11/2014 4:38:00 AM
hauntingly beautiful, anne... i like the suspense and eerie feel of this piece... wow.. happy day to you and teddy.. huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/11/2014 5:19:00 AM
- Glad you enjoyed it, Nette - Thanks for the visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/10/2014 11:47:00 PM
What a fine Halloween poem you have hear. Hope I can sleep well after reading it. Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/11/2014 5:18:00 AM
- Sleep well, Matthew ... thanks for the nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/10/2014 2:23:00 PM
Wonderful! This should rank high in the contest.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2014 2:30:00 PM
- Maurice, thanks for the nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/10/2014 12:51:00 PM
I wanted more.., beautiful indeed.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2014 12:55:00 PM
.....lol....maybe ... "part 2" coming to the next Halloween :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments,Victor - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/10/2014 10:29:00 AM
breathtaking piece of writing a fine golden pen i tip my hat anne lise
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2014 11:32:00 AM
- Where is your hat, Liam :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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