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- Haiku X 59 - Divine Drops -

A game of colors The old fountain in the park An admiration Reflect the sunlight Consumed in the purest glow Crystalline small drops 05.07.2015 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/4/2016 7:50:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise,i thank you for dropping by my page earlier. I do love the Haiku form. I don't know why i love them so much. It could be that it must be hard to encapsulate a vision in so small an amount of lines. You seem to do it with such ease, at least it does seem that way. You paint the scene so well. A Haiku, skillfully written, stays in the mind forever....Vladislav. A seven and a fav.
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Date: 1/5/2016 3:33:00 AM
- I love haiku, much said on 3 lines - I have posted 70 haiku, and there will be more :)) - Thanks for the visit and comments ..... especially thanks for a "fav." and a 7, Vladislav - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/27/2015 5:30:00 PM
Beautiful haiku. love phyl
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Date: 7/28/2015 3:04:00 AM
- Dear Phyllis, thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/20/2015 9:14:00 AM
Colors and sunshine consumed in the purest glow drifting as divine drops from the old fountain always admirable. Beauty in excellency. 7++ i feel for this wonderful haiku. Loved always my lovely lovely friend,bl
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Date: 7/20/2015 10:41:00 AM
- Yes, dear friend Bl - it is really beautiful to look at, especially when the sun shines :) - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/11/2015 2:22:00 PM
Wonderful. Your drops go beyond. Love, daver
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Date: 7/20/2015 10:42:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Daver :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/7/2015 12:03:00 PM
Good descriptive work..I can see the scene from your artifully expressed lines..Great joy..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
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Date: 7/7/2015 12:07:00 PM
- Thanks for stopping by the old fountain in the park, dear Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/7/2015 7:00:00 AM
Beautiful imagery once again with these modern twin haiku, Anne. Hope you're keeping well. hugs!
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Date: 7/7/2015 11:58:00 AM
- One small old fountain in a park ... sunshine and colorful drops, I share with you dear Kim :) - Thanks for the nice visit and friendly comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/7/2015 5:47:00 AM
lovely oh so lovely, being away often as i am, miss you.
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Date: 7/7/2015 11:56:00 AM
- Long time no see, it's nice to see you "old friend" Harry :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/6/2015 4:22:00 PM
Anne-Lise, beautifully pen haikus 7 and thanks for visiting my muse poem
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Date: 7/7/2015 11:54:00 AM
- Small things can give great moments :) - Thanks for the nice visit, a 7 and lovely comments, B.W, :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/6/2015 3:32:00 PM
that's very pretty. a game of colors!!
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Date: 7/6/2015 3:39:00 PM
- A beautiful play of color when the sun hits the water droplets, Andrea :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/6/2015 10:25:00 AM
Vivid view of the fountain with this haiku. Well done. love phyl
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Date: 7/6/2015 1:14:00 PM
- It is the ability to see and experience the beauty that makes people happy, dear Phyllis :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/6/2015 10:20:00 AM
a beautiful and lovely haiku, excellent write, it keep the readers attension
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:55:00 PM
- Thank you for the second time visit, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/6/2015 10:13:00 AM
Anne Lise, sparkling sights!Beautiful! hugs!~Olive Eloisa =)
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Date: 7/6/2015 1:10:00 PM
- The drops, so full of light and color :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/6/2015 4:43:00 AM
dazzling word- scenes that invigorate, dear anne... a pleasure to read you on a stormy day.. huggs
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Date: 7/6/2015 1:07:00 PM
- Thanks for enjoy my : - Haiku X 59 - Divine Dew - :) - A stormy day (?).... be careful, dear Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/5/2015 11:27:00 PM
I ate a restaurant today that had a view of a lovely pond with a fountain. You captured the sparkling water beautifully, Anne Lise! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 7/6/2015 1:02:00 PM
- Yes it is really beautiful to look at, especially when the sun shines :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/5/2015 10:42:00 PM
A beautiful picture that your words have painted here, Anne-Lise. Very nicely written!
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Date: 7/6/2015 1:00:00 PM
- Words to please and words to share :)) - Kelly, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/5/2015 6:02:00 PM
Very imaginative use of words and skillfully constructed. Emile.
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:53:00 PM
- A pleasure that you enjoy my : - Haiku X 59 - Divine Dew - :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/5/2015 5:47:00 PM
very beautifully painted anne lise love the picture it drew for me dear pal
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:52:00 PM
- Small things in my everyday life, dear friend Liam :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/5/2015 5:11:00 PM
What an excellent write, so beautiful and wise. i love your haiku poem.................A.M
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:47:00 PM
- A pleasure to share a beautiful picture :) - Thanks for the nice visit and friendly comments, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/5/2015 4:22:00 PM
Full marks to this delightful double-haiku, Anne Lise! Love the imagery! #7 hugs // paul
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:45:00 PM
- Even though it has had its "better days", it is still beautiful :) -Thanks for your visit, a 7 and comments, Paul - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/5/2015 3:13:00 PM
Hello, Sunshine. How lovely to spend a day in the part and dream while looking at the colors from this fountain. Lovely haiku. Hugs to you, my dear.
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:42:00 PM
- Even an old fountains with moss, can be beautiful :) - Thanks for the nice visit and friendly comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/5/2015 3:02:00 PM
simply stunning Anne lise:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:40:00 PM
- One small old fountain ... caught my attention :) -Thanks for your visit, a seven and comments, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/5/2015 2:02:00 PM
Stunning piece A-L. It reminds me of Buckingham Fountain here in Chicago. You need to see pictures. I'm taking the wee ones there on Thursday for a food festival.
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:37:00 PM
- A little old fountain ... sunshine and colorful drops, I share with you - Thanks for the nice visit and friendly comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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