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- Every Breath You Take -

To get my heart in the right rhythm, I have to catch your inner you Holding hands kiss colors inside sunshine warm paradise Together we share our dreams with a glass of pink champagne Celebrating a living memory of eternal beauty sparkling gems glisten We will find ourselves in an everlasting magical journey Where the golden barley shakes silken softly whispers in our breeze I'll walk with you through ages of time Uniting as one shadow embraced dancing silver treasure Pure angel of dawn, you've stolen my heart Weightless without body floating beautiful falling inside the soul's desire Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 18.04.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Richard Gumede

Date: 5/11/2015 8:18:00 AM

Good one.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/11/2015 8:38:00 AM

- Thanks for visit and comments, Richard - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Miguel Torres

Date: 5/2/2015 7:23:00 PM

Not bad, Mizz Anne Lise! Congrats to you on this POW.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2015 12:56:00 PM

- Thanks for congratulations - Nice of you, Miquel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kathy Ostapchuk

Date: 5/2/2015 5:12:00 PM

lovely poem

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2015 12:56:00 PM

- Kathy, thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Trenton Moore

Date: 5/1/2015 9:37:00 AM

I enjoyed it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/2/2015 12:40:00 PM

- Trenton, thanks for visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Marilyn Williams

Date: 4/30/2015 8:32:00 PM

I love the write, it gives breathe to every word. Congratulations Anne Lise Andresen.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/1/2015 4:09:00 AM

- Thanks for congratulations - Nice of you, Marilyn - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jill Spagnola

Date: 4/28/2015 9:35:00 PM

Your poem feels as light as angels hair. Divine. Congratulations

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2015 3:08:00 AM

- Thanks for congratulations - Nice of you, Jill - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/28/2015 7:49:00 PM

This lovely poem lifts one's spirits with the whisper of romance !! Congratulations on your poem of the week, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2015 3:08:00 AM

- Thanks for congratulations - Nice of you, Carrie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 4/27/2015 4:11:00 AM

Congrats Anne,I am so happy to see this as the Poem of the week ,no doubt an excellent work...huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/27/2015 8:21:00 AM

- Nice to see you, Kayod5 :) - Thank you for greeting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mary Diliberto

Date: 4/26/2015 7:29:00 PM

i enjoyed every word, beautiful

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/27/2015 12:42:00 AM

- Thank you, Mary! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 4/26/2015 1:01:00 PM

Anne-Lise, Congratulations to you and to Liam on this fine poem and for having it chosen for "Poem of the Week." Extraordinarily well-done!! Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/26/2015 1:58:00 PM

- The pleasure is great, especially when I can share it 50/50 with a good friend .... my co- partner Liam :) - Thank you, Gary! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 4/26/2015 11:50:00 AM

passing you a smile anne lise to congratulate you dear pal wishing you a blessed beautiful day and thank you all for the wonderful comments heartfelt

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/26/2015 12:07:00 PM

- A happy surprise my friend Liam - I am more than 50% happy :))) - I am 110% happy !!!! - CONGRATULATIONS TO US !!!! - warm hugs // Anne-Lise :)))

Tim Smith

Date: 4/26/2015 11:35:00 AM

Congratulations you two on the Poem of the Week : )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/26/2015 12:03:00 PM

- A happy surprise .... - Thank you, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/24/2015 4:04:00 PM

Any collaboration between you and Liam is magical, and this is no exception.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2015 4:32:00 PM

- Glad you enjoy it, Monterey :) - Thank you for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison

Date: 4/23/2015 8:18:00 AM

You guys deserve a big applause for this romantic write... MAGICAL! Hugs, Jack xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2015 8:41:00 AM

- Liam is easy to work with and a wonderful friend :)))

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/23/2015 8:32:00 AM

Terrified... I definitely would be too! Really can't imagine how you collaborate! Guess it's a lot of back and forth conversation and editing! Must have to be very open to a different approach!!! xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/23/2015 8:25:00 AM

- Liam and me have made many write together ..... and I really love them all together - But, I must admit that the first time he asked me .... I was terrified :) - Thank you for visiting and comments, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jill Spagnola

Date: 4/22/2015 3:08:00 AM

sooo beautiful

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/22/2015 3:43:00 AM

- Thank you for visiting and comments, Jill :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/21/2015 6:38:00 PM

A very romantic write by both of you. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/22/2015 3:05:00 AM

- Thank you, Phyllis :) - Glad you enjoy it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper

Date: 4/19/2015 6:16:00 PM

My friend the images you and Liam have woven are beautiful. You two write so well together, seemless, exquisite phrases. I truely love the magic.Bravo! love Shane xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/20/2015 1:55:00 AM

- A pleasure to share, thanks for the lovely comments and visits Shane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/19/2015 2:57:00 PM

Beautiful cowrite Anne...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2015 4:30:00 PM

- Thank you, Joseph :) - Glad you enjoy it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/19/2015 12:46:00 PM

Another romantic collaborative work..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2015 12:49:00 PM

- Glad you enjoy it, Sara :) - Thank you for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/19/2015 9:34:00 AM

A great collab my friends.. Very romantic poetry and you guys are a perfect match for writing together IMHO. A7 and bravooooooo!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2015 11:49:00 AM

- Glad you enjoy it, Robert :) - Thank you for visiting, a 7, bravoooooo and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/19/2015 1:45:00 AM

Another romantic duet from your pens my friends! Lovely.... :) Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2015 11:47:00 AM

- Thanking you for visit and comments, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 4/18/2015 9:35:00 PM

Hi Liam n' Anne Lise!Another very beautiful and wonderful love poem penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Very beautifully penned.A very romantic beautiful sweet and passionate love poem to be held so very close to my heart.smiling.I enjoy it!A real gem!Just awesome!A 7+++ to each!A fav!Your pens are truly mighty golden!Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2015 11:46:00 AM

- Thanking you for visit, a 7 + fav. and comments, Dorian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/18/2015 4:23:00 PM

brightly done from liam and you, anne... so wndearing!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2015 11:46:00 AM

- Thanking you for visit and comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/18/2015 2:56:00 PM

When two hearts beat as one, nothing can tear them apart, and that is when dreams become reality... I enjoyed this very enchanting write from you and Liam! Well done to you both!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2015 11:45:00 AM

- Thanking you for visits and comments, Kelly :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/18/2015 2:49:00 PM

Sorry, perhaps forgot to click 7. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/19/2015 11:44:00 AM

- Thanking you for a 7 :)