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Dear God, please give me a little brother I want to be a big brother Dear God, tell my father and mother I`m going to be a kind and good big brother Dear God, give me a little brother He can get my three-wheeled bicycle I`ll teach him to ride Dear God, you must not forget then I will need a new bike Dear God, it must be blue with yellow stripes Dear God, please think about this now My best friend got a new bike yesterday Dear God, this prayer comes from John, five years living in the white house on the corner Amen and good night Dear God *** 30.03.2012 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Thank you for my 2nd place in the contest -

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Date: 9/9/2014 3:24:00 PM
I pray that God answers yours AND his prayers... Exquisite write and I LOVE the repetition of 'Dear God'....Congratulations are DEFINITELY in order...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2014 4:10:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Tim :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/8/2014 3:01:00 AM
Oh, this is a heartfelt prayer! Beautiful! Congratulations, Anne!
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Date: 9/8/2014 3:49:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Hija :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/7/2014 5:04:00 PM
There's nothing more precious than a Childs prayer. Congratulations Anne Lise
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Date: 9/8/2014 3:49:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats, Brenda :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/7/2014 12:13:00 PM
I am sure this one made God smile. congratulations Anna Lise.
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Date: 9/7/2014 12:16:00 PM
- I hope so :)) - Thanks for visiting and congrats,Joyce :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/7/2014 10:01:00 AM
Anne Lise, Great job. You got right into the persona of a little boy with style. You built a nice case for him to get his bike. Are you a lawyer? Very nice prayer. Very nice poem. Congratulations on a fine win. Take care. Earl
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Date: 9/7/2014 11:34:00 AM
:))) No, I'm nurse - Thanks for visiting and congrats, Earl :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/7/2014 6:44:00 AM
Very tender write Anne Lise! How innocent to be asking for small sweet things in prayers which I can truly relate! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 9/7/2014 6:54:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats Dr. Upma :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/7/2014 5:04:00 AM
Nice creative write, Congrats.Anne
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Date: 9/7/2014 5:36:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting and congrats Dr.Ram :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2014 11:31:00 PM
So creative - love and prayers and congratulations, Gina
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2014 4:09:00 AM
- Thank you for my 2nd place in the contest, Regina !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2013 9:44:00 AM
This is such an endearing little poem... I wonder if this really happened? A child's mind is very open and doesn't hold back his feelings and opinions on things... very sweet writing Anne!
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Date: 3/24/2013 12:27:00 PM
Perhaps such a prayer was sent .... I've only used imagination.- Timothy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 7/24/2012 12:30:00 PM
what a nice poem I like this one lots! jane xoxo
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Date: 7/24/2012 12:41:00 PM
Jane, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 6/24/2012 8:08:00 AM
Really very warm and touching poem Anne Lise!
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Date: 6/24/2012 8:11:00 AM
Manos, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 6/20/2012 11:12:00 AM
A heart touching and innocent prayer .God has been waiting for long to hear such one among millions selfish calls .jk
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Date: 6/20/2012 11:15:00 AM
jk. - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/21/2012 2:29:00 PM
that's a lovel childs heartfelt prayer, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 4/21/2012 2:31:00 PM
Erich,thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/14/2012 8:05:00 PM
Lovely, thanks for posting. Thank for your kind remarks on my poem.
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Date: 4/15/2012 3:58:00 AM
Adrienne, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/13/2012 10:05:00 AM
(: awww this is sweet, funny and cute. I love it! It kinda reminds me of some of my own prayers ("Dear God, give me a big brother. I'll be the best little sister ever. I know its not possible for my parents to go back in time. But I'd love for a big brother thats all mine..." )
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2012 10:39:00 AM
lol...Jessica, thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/13/2012 9:11:00 AM
Sweet prayer of a baby to become a big brother to help the younger from childhood life having colorful dream with demand to God at night. Wonderfully done with innocent feeling. loved always, bl
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Date: 4/13/2012 10:37:00 AM
bl, thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/13/2012 6:55:00 AM
So innocent and Pure, wish I could remember how to pray that way,LOL. too cute!
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Date: 4/13/2012 10:37:00 AM
Lisa, thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/10/2012 9:12:00 PM
Reading this poem really made me smile Anne Lise... I love the sound of honesty and innocence. Diana Mohammed
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Date: 4/10/2012 11:51:00 PM
Diana, thank you for visit and comments my poem. -oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/9/2012 12:18:00 PM
how nice ,I cannot stop smiling ,it is so pure and honest pray,I absolutely love it,Ivy
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Date: 4/9/2012 2:05:00 PM
Ivy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/9/2012 8:18:00 AM
This is such a sweet write, Anne Lise-- I can't help but think of my nephews as I read this! :D Thank you for passing by my poems and I hope you had a wonderful Easter-- Congrats btw on all your wins :D hugs :D
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Date: 4/9/2012 8:21:00 AM
Thank you nikko for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/8/2012 6:32:00 PM
If you change that bike to a "helicopter that really flies" you will have plagerized my childhood prayer! : ) beautiful Anne Lise Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 4/9/2012 4:41:00 AM
Robert, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/8/2012 2:51:00 PM
This is a sad and resonant poem. Nicely created.
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Date: 4/8/2012 2:52:00 PM
Nicola, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/7/2012 1:51:00 PM
Sweetest prayer. Keep on writing.
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Date: 4/7/2012 2:12:00 PM
Nadia, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/5/2012 5:43:00 AM
Good write. sounds like a typical 5-year-old's prayer.- JH
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Date: 4/7/2012 2:11:00 PM
J.H. thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Date: 4/4/2012 3:47:00 PM
I love this 'prayer' poem. It makes me think of my children when they were young.
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Date: 4/7/2012 2:10:00 PM
Joann, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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