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- Dancing In the Moonlight -

A half moon illuminate the entire night sky Shadows of a dancing couple Last sight of everything that can be this night Like when the music stops and everything becomes quiet Try to focus on this moment Paradise is golden, they say But is impossible to know Do not ask for more Do you remember the scent of aromatic flowers Share tender feelings and thoughts They are left alone on this journey Do not ask what's coming 13.11.2015 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Fullmoon Sway

Date: 1/23/2016 6:14:00 PM

i love it ! Its beautifully written

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/24/2016 6:09:00 AM

- Thanks for nice visit and comments, Fullmoon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein

Date: 12/5/2015 6:25:00 PM

Anne lise , every time you impress me with another sweet sweet poem ...the words u use are so smart and the way u use them is even smarter ...u put a lot of lovely pictures and lovely thoughts, u can make the reader feel everything and live the moment through ur writings so once again I salute you my dear and I wish you best of luck.. Hugs :D

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2015 6:56:00 AM

- Many great words that encourage, thanks Dalia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/27/2015 11:36:00 AM

A wonderful piece can envision dancing in the moonlight. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2015 12:39:00 PM

- Phyllis, thank you for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/20/2015 11:02:00 AM

Dear Anne Lise : highlights the gratitude of living in the moments we create. Inspiring read. SuZ

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/20/2015 12:19:00 PM

- Thanks for comments and visits, SuZ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 11/19/2015 9:40:00 AM

This is another magnifiscent and romantic write from you my very dear friend, Anne Lise! I'm Embracing it again and you as always! So loved it and enjoyed! A shining 7 ++ too from me! Thank you so much for sharing! May I've also this chance to Thank you so much once again for your warm visit and encouraging words on my poem. More power and blessings to you! love lots and biggest sweet Hug to you from me, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/19/2015 1:03:00 PM

- Dear friend Leonora, thank you for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/19/2015 8:50:00 AM

We should all dance in the moonlight at some time in life! What a lovely piece you have written, Anne-Lise! It's a 7! Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/19/2015 1:01:00 PM

- Thank you Pandita, for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 11/18/2015 12:12:00 AM

F.E.F. :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/18/2015 2:51:00 AM

- ...... "But is impossible to know .......Do not ask for more" ..... :)) - f.e.f. :))))

Thomas Martin

Date: 11/15/2015 4:55:00 PM

A delight to readAnne, Good use of expression and rjyme. A 7 for sure

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2015 2:59:00 AM

- Thank you Thomas, for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 11/15/2015 7:11:00 AM

Beautifully crafted Annelise. Always a pleasure to peruse your work. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2015 8:24:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, always nice to see you Mustapha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan

Date: 11/14/2015 6:09:00 PM

Hi Anne Lise this is a beautiful little poem, it is nice to see you do one on your own, I am afraid I do not like collaberations as you can't really call it your own so damn good work, you do such a lovely job, hope you are well, take care.................Vera

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2015 3:58:00 AM

- You're right about that ..... co- writing is not 100% mine - But it's very nice to write together - I'm glad you like this ..... this is 101% my, that I share with you :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, always nice to see you Vera :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Notmy Realname

Date: 11/14/2015 10:13:00 AM

Beautiful

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2015 1:42:00 PM

- Thank you Notmy, for friendly visits and lovely comment - I wish you a great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/14/2015 8:03:00 AM

Hello Anne-Lise Dear One, A radiant and most touching romantic write. Great imagery too!! A "TR"!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2015 1:42:00 PM

- "TR" I am grateful, thank you my friend Gary - I wish you a wonderful weekend - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/14/2015 1:31:00 AM

enticed by the charm of love that simply flows... how lovely, anne.. happy day with my huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2015 1:38:00 PM

- A pleasure to share with you, glad you like it - I wish you a wonderful weekend, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/14/2015 12:05:00 AM

Beautiful, reminds this song!!! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hMc8naeeSS8

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2015 6:11:00 AM

- A great "old" song, Arthur - (I can not recall having heard it before) - Thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 11/13/2015 8:07:00 PM

Beautiful and wise, as always, Anne. You define wisdom to the next level. I wish you a wonderful weekend! hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2015 1:35:00 PM

- Kim, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comment - I wish you a great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/13/2015 7:56:00 PM

Beautiful pen Anne-Lise! This is a very romantic n' sweet love poem you've painted here.Very beautifully written my dear friend, Anne.Just dazzling! I truly enjoyed it!Just awesome!A 7! Sending you my love n' prayers!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you always!:)Hugs!D.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/14/2015 1:34:00 PM

- Dorian, thank you for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments - I wish you a great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 11/13/2015 1:51:00 PM

Let the moon carry you where she wants you to go...lovely

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2015 2:57:00 PM

- Thanks, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 11/13/2015 1:11:00 PM

as they dance, at a glance, there's a chance, to solidify romance, as a trance, serving to enhance, so they advance, to enlightenment's stance....I Love it anne....and I can't wait to see what you think of my poetry souper heroes....;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2015 1:40:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visits and great words, Eric - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/13/2015 1:08:00 PM

Oh what beautiful romantic imagery Anne Lise - I half expected to see you had written this with Liam!! :-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2015 1:38:00 PM

- Liam has posted a beautiful poem today, I recommended it with a warm heart - thank you for your visit and comment on my poem, dear Jan - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)