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- Begging Sunlight -

A yellow song about autumn Leaves falling slowly May nature embrace me gently Birds mixing tunes Of such ecstatic sound Rising a sweet melody Creeds and song carried with the wind in the highest tempo Kissing one heart priceless gold Crossing bridges and mountain majesty of the world Rustling softly breathless whispers treasure Most quiet need, by autumn sun and candlelight Like sweet thoughts in a dream Dazzling of wonder as magical charms floating flutters gently on a breeze Delightful day it is for all who dwell delicately blown upon warm sunlight rays The sumptuous yearning of summer that left Breathtaking feeling dance circles around Viewing elements and seasons as they change Deeply touches embracing beauty inside Into the dawn's early and tender caresses You stand in front of the sun morning dewdrops upon your vision Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 16.10.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Funom Makama

Date: 12/5/2015 9:12:00 AM

What a lovely poem! Spectacular and mind romancing. A 7 and an excellent share

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/5/2015 10:56:00 AM

Date: 11/6/2015 12:40:00 - Thanks Funom, for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/6/2015 9:08:00 AM

A beautiful autumn song like filled with beautiful colors and silence. 7 my lovely lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2015 12:44:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, dear friend Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama

Date: 10/30/2015 8:00:00 AM

splendid``` great``` beautiful``` awesome and well expressed. As always, beautiful lines from a creative mind. Definitely a 7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/6/2015 12:40:00 PM

- Thanks Funom, for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/28/2015 2:45:00 PM

Fantastic collaboration my friends. Every stanza great and the whole is awesome!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2015 3:55:00 PM

- Thank you, very much appreciate your words, Robert - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/19/2015 6:04:00 PM

You manage to bring in visions and sounds from near and far to make something beautiful to think upon. Almost like a magic fountain are you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/20/2015 3:47:00 AM

- We spend far too much time to think about "bad" thing ..... we need to use live to see and enjoy the beauty around us - thanks for the visits and lovely comments, Duke - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edlynn Nau

Date: 10/19/2015 2:29:00 PM

Love the ride through summer here and the imagery! Favorite is the entire last stanza. Lovely you two!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2015 2:31:00 PM

- Thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit, Edlynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/18/2015 7:32:00 AM

Another brilliant collaboration from you and Liam! I especially like the end of the 4th stanza. On fall and winter days, standing in the warm sunlight is joyous.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/19/2015 2:31:00 PM

- Monterey, thanks for the lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein

Date: 10/17/2015 3:32:00 PM

Very beautiful poem my lovely Anne, great work... Love and hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2015 7:25:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Dalia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor

Date: 10/17/2015 2:53:00 AM

Vibrant and alive beautiful duet. Nicely written. Enjoyed written.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2015 7:24:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Michael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/16/2015 11:51:00 PM

Anne Lise and Laim: Like other commenters, I absolutely delighted in your poem. I could feel the sunshine and I welcomed it ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2015 7:24:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, CatCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/16/2015 11:25:00 PM

Sunshine, I'm enchanted by this beautiful write....simply stunning. You two write so well together.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2015 7:24:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Red Barchettadrive

Date: 10/16/2015 11:22:00 PM

Enjoyed your collab!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2015 7:23:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Red :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2015 8:28:00 PM

this is a really pretty one, you two . Do do DUET!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2015 7:23:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/16/2015 8:24:00 PM

This is wonderful Anne and Liam, truly inspiring.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/18/2015 7:23:00 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/16/2015 7:19:00 PM

thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments deeply appreciated wishing you all a lovely week

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/16/2015 7:17:00 PM

truly anne lise your pen dances a golden beautiful tune wishing you a blessed weekend always a great pleasure writing with you pal

Tim Smith

Date: 10/16/2015 6:01:00 PM

You two write together with a magical pen...lovely Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/17/2015 3:02:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/16/2015 3:43:00 PM

you golden words never fail to impress me - such a seasonal delight - outstanding collaboration as ever:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/16/2015 3:49:00 PM

- Again (!!!!) , I know exactly what you mean :))))) - Thank you, very much appreciate your words, dear Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2015 3:18:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your collaborative work..Good job you two..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/16/2015 3:50:00 PM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/16/2015 3:15:00 PM

I can tell you inspire each other to write brilliant poetry together! This is such a lovely gift for me to carry with me today as I see the Doctor for another shot in the eye. Poetry helps calm me and your poem is exceptional! Thank you! Blessings, Connie #7

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/17/2015 12:00:00 PM

- Eye surgery ? - Laser shot ? - ..... It goes certainly fine, Connie :)

Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/16/2015 11:49:00 PM

Bless you, Connie - bless you - I know it went well, and I know it is now over - always good when that is over ... CayCay (hope it is okay, Anne Lise, to spontaneously respond to Connie in your box)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/16/2015 3:53:00 PM

- Oh dear ..... - Who is shot in the eye ? ... You ?

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/16/2015 1:48:00 PM

Hi Anne Lise n' Liam!A most beautiful, sweet n' captivating love poem inspired by nature, autumn and all, that you've written here my dearest friends.So much beauty in it.Just dazzling!I love it!A very beautiful, sweet piece so full of light and color to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautifully written.I truly enjoyed it!Just awesome!Great imagery!Very enchanting!Excellent piece!Wonderful collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 to each!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/16/2015 2:21:00 PM

- A whole bouquet of beautiful words from you, Dorian :) - Thanks for visiting a 7 and comments - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/16/2015 1:26:00 PM

I absolutely loved the beauty and imagery of your poem, Anne Lise! It was a pleasure to read and enjoy:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/16/2015 1:37:00 PM

- A pleasure that you enjoyed our poem: Begging Sunlight - Thanks for visiting and comments, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/16/2015 1:10:00 PM

Charmed by this inspired autumn poem that makes us forget the passing away of a lovely summer. I know from experience that a single fine autumn day surpasses many sunny summer days! Well done Anne Lise & Liam! May you have a lovely weekend. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/16/2015 1:13:00 PM

- I am always a bit sad when summer is over :) - thanks for the beautiful comments, Paul - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 10/16/2015 12:57:00 PM

glorious sunlight....so soft, yet so bright....with the cool welcoming breezes blown....ensuring the gift of sunlight is truly known....;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/16/2015 1:10:00 PM

- Thanks for the friendly words and pleasant visit, Eric :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Miraj Raha

Date: 10/16/2015 12:45:00 PM

A brilliant collaborated write!!! Autumn sings with both of you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/16/2015 1:34:00 PM

- Miray, thanks for visiting and lovely comment:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)