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Your voice rose gold touching deep beauty If I were a cloud I would rain kisses all over you It was no secret that she was in love with the rain Landing on paradise blown away like a hurricane Lifting me of my feet floating in your beautiful words To set sail in strong love storm Dance with me in grace If love is gentle like you Long gentle kiss awaiting warm and soft lips Holding hands your grace joy lights up inside every shadow Dreaming by candlelight The obsession tiny diamonds from heaven pour Take me with you into your dreams where I will be happy and free with you forever more Within the angel rays of sunlight sparkle A tantalizing sensation wowed by the gaze Together we will travel through the unknown path of rose petals Twelve red roses softly blush scarlet wishing in the heavens for you we will sing in another world angel Maiden of the ocean whispering waves Each one salted with your spices Let the waves hypnotize us In Magic moments we shared so much more Trying to soak everything in, not wasting any time Dream of a thousand lifetimes beyond compare Gentle winds kissing you a queen in four corners within warm pockets inside fingers of air Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 10.07.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 9/27/2015 10:26:00 PM
FANTASTIC POEM AND CONGRATS ON SUCH A JOINT WRITE. Big congratulations on this gem being chosen POTD.. A7
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Date: 7/22/2015 11:37:00 AM
this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/22/2015 1:17:00 PM
- Funom, thank you for a 7 and a lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/21/2015 7:54:00 AM
A superb collaboration which I thoroughly enjoyed reading this evening my dear friend, Anne Lise. Hand salute again to both of you! Congrats! love lots and big hug, Leonora
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Date: 7/21/2015 12:24:00 PM
- One of many poems with my dear friend Liam ..... I'm very fond of them all - I'm happy that you enjoy this one, dear Leonora - thank you for visit and lovely congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/20/2015 11:50:00 AM
Beautiful an d dreamy! Thank you for taking me on this lovely journey, Anne Lise. Elaine
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Date: 7/20/2015 11:55:00 AM
- A pleasure to share with all my friends, Elaine - Thank you for a lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/17/2015 9:41:00 PM
Better late than never, Anne. Just got to check this week's POTW and found out it's yours and Liam's. Congrats and hugs to you both!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/18/2015 4:27:00 AM
- Dear Kim, thank you for a lovely congratulations :) - Never to late - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/16/2015 2:46:00 PM
Anne-Lise congratulations on poem of the week
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2015 2:56:00 PM
- B.W., thank you for a lovely congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/16/2015 7:09:00 AM
Oh another excellent collab from you two, amazing poetry....
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Date: 7/16/2015 12:30:00 PM
- Harry, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/16/2015 3:47:00 AM
This is simply excellent,congrats Anne...huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/16/2015 12:29:00 PM
- Kayod5, thank you for a lovely congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/15/2015 12:37:00 AM
Excellent write...with fantastic flow of words. It is a 7!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2015 11:05:00 AM
- Irfanulla, thanks for visiting a 7 and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/14/2015 10:53:00 PM
Anne-Lise, You and Liam did an amazing job.Congratulations on getting the poem of the week! :-) Alexis
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/15/2015 11:05:00 AM
- Alexis, thank you for a lovely congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/14/2015 12:41:00 PM
This is such a lovely collaboration from both of you and very deserving of POTW. CONGRATULATIONS!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2015 12:54:00 PM
- Thank you for a lovely congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/14/2015 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations to you both...Poem of the Week
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Date: 7/14/2015 12:54:00 PM
- Thank you for a lovely congratulations, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2015 10:23:00 PM
Big, big congrats on a POTW, deservedly so. Viv x
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2015 9:32:00 AM
- Thank you for a lovely congratulations, Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2015 7:21:00 PM
Long live love poems. Enchanting, captivating. So you.
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Date: 7/14/2015 9:34:00 AM
- Iris, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2015 7:14:00 PM
Romantic and very exquisite write like the diamond that writes it a 7. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/14/2015 9:34:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting a 7 and comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2015 5:09:00 PM
Poem of the week woohooo many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2015 9:30:00 AM
- Thank you for a lovely congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2015 5:03:00 PM
Love it! Great POW!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/14/2015 9:29:00 AM
- Thank you, Marilyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2015 11:45:00 AM
firstly anne lise truly a pleasure writing this with you, sparkling magic your pen and thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments passing you all a warm smile
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2015 4:06:00 PM
- Congratulations to you, dear Liam !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2015 11:22:00 AM
Lovely write.....A.M.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2015 1:36:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2015 6:11:00 AM
Symphony of love composed with nature's splendor under the guidance of angels! Hugs, a 7.
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Date: 7/14/2015 9:33:00 AM
- Thanks for visiting a 7 and comments, dear Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/13/2015 3:33:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam!Congratulations on POTW!Such a very beautiful love poem collaboration between the two of you my dearest friends.So beautifully written.Just magnificent!Well done!I'm so very happy for you both:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 7/13/2015 1:35:00 PM
- Thank you for a lovely congratulations, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/12/2015 6:07:00 PM
A sweet and powerful poem that speaks of love..Peter
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2015 1:36:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Peter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/12/2015 2:17:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise and Liam, Congratulations are fully in order here on this most wonderful write selected for "Poem of the Week." The message and beauty of this free verse write is quite romantic and quite excellent!! Congrats Again on a poetic effort Very-Well Done!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/13/2015 1:27:00 PM
- Thank you for a lovely congratulations, dear friend Gary - This was really a great surprise and always a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/12/2015 11:02:00 AM
there you go!.. cheers on your POW feature, ann and liam..huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/12/2015 11:36:00 AM
- Wooow Liam and Me: POW: Playful On Web .......... :)))) - Thank you for congratulations and visit, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/12/2015 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations A-L and Liam on being POW.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/12/2015 11:25:00 AM
- Are we ..... so nice :))) - Thanks Tim! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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