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- the Madness of the World -

Edens of Garden's beauty Heaven clear and blue The finest dream of all What you will achieve Abolish bleeding wound A drop of blood - makes more than a tear Accept my advice See the butterfly fly and angels dance The eagle soars silently in the blue Wings that turns slowly ... slowly at first then faster Taking its prey - brutal and bloody Abolish the scream comforting the child A particularly light in the garden   thrown in waves of the sun`s applause The inner joy does warms the heart blows away the madness of the storm's power I am looking for soft stuff   that I can take into my heart   Heavenly tones promises eternal peace Sensitive thoughts comes and goes ...   It's the truth I'm looking for 13.04.2014 A-L Andresen :)

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Date: 5/7/2014 4:41:00 PM
A wonderful picture you paint. Shines like a star to guide a lost soul home!!! Bravo!! A love that big must surely rest in two hearts at least! For if in one only it would surely burst!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2014 4:15:00 AM
- Robert, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem :- The Madness Of The World - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/7/2014 7:48:00 AM
hi good poem- i think it was walt whitman who said " what we're after is to find the truth in things more than the beauty" keep going! michael
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Date: 5/7/2014 7:59:00 AM
- Michael, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem :- The Madness Of The World - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/21/2014 12:52:00 AM
Hello Anne, Thank you for your kindness and welcoming me. It's nice to have found such a nice place full of wonderful people. Your write here is amazing. Just amazing! Thanks for sharing. Peace, Deborah
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Date: 4/21/2014 5:02:00 AM
- Deborah, thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/20/2014 4:53:00 PM
Marvelous verse here. Simply stunning. SUPER COOL POEM! - thanks for posting Sincerely, David Rox
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Date: 4/20/2014 5:01:00 PM
- Super cool that you liked it DWB - thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/19/2014 11:28:00 AM
I love the way you are thinking on this wonderful poem Anne Lise. love phyl
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Date: 4/19/2014 1:47:00 PM
- Phyllis my friend, thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/16/2014 1:13:00 AM
Anne, a great write. Kudos! Marvelous imagery, as usual, and more than few great lines: "...the sun's applause," "looking for soft stuff," and the great ending, "It's the truth I'm looking for." I'm looking for it too. I don't know if you collaborate, but it would be fun to give it a whirl. Love and peace, Mel :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/16/2014 2:24:00 AM
- Collaborate ..? ... I'll send you a S - mail later, Mel :) - Thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/15/2014 7:52:00 AM
Agree and you put all too well. Like the lines: "Abolish bleeding wound. A drop of blood - makes more than a tear". Tough, but real imagery, Anne. Well done!
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Date: 4/15/2014 7:57:00 AM
- .... Never lose your dreams, Shane :) .... - Thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/15/2014 5:46:00 AM
Isn't it God's truth who is looking for us? Why do things seem so sensitive? When with God we love to live And is it really always essential That our poems will be punctual. Is what we want only free form Which will establish a new norm When our souls want to be implicit And in our poems equally explicit. Are you related to Katya Andresen? James Thomas Horn www.poetrysoup.com
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/15/2014 6:37:00 AM
- No, I am not related with: Katya Andresen. - Some look for God answer ... others are looking for quite different things..... - - James, thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/15/2014 3:16:00 AM
wonderful piece...and lovely...I liked the blending of the assonance and the alliteration
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Date: 4/15/2014 3:21:00 AM
- Allan, thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2014 3:11:00 PM
It's beautiful!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/15/2014 3:05:00 AM
- Laura, thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2014 1:54:00 PM
beautiful imagery Anne Lise really enjoyed this write. Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/14/2014 2:08:00 PM
The comments jumping happened to me yesterday - i just deleted them and started again lol
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2014 2:01:00 PM
..... sorry, my friend bl. - the comments jumps up ...... and it falls down
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2014 1:59:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely visit and words from you dear friend Jan! - Always a pleasure to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2014 1:54:00 PM
Yes, perfect poem worded with golden pen. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 4/14/2014 2:02:00 PM
..... sorry, my friend bl. - the comments jumps up ...... and it falls down
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2014 1:59:00 PM
- Thanks for the lovely visit and words from you dear friend Jan! - Always a pleasure to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2014 8:38:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise. A wonderful collage of imagery from the world -- some comforting, others harsh. I hope you find your truth and that it brings you peace....Sam
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2014 11:53:00 AM
- Some of the good and some of the bad ..... Sam, thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2014 8:20:00 AM
Truth is what we need but then again is it truth that we really want..Enjoyed reading your work..Great topic chosen..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2014 11:50:00 AM
- Wounds will heal with care..... Sara, thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2014 7:21:00 AM
Good luck finding it
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2014 7:35:00 AM
- .... Never lose the joy ....- Richard, thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2014 7:15:00 AM
Powerful and creative! Your images soar! We can never stop searching for peace and truth amid the chaos.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2014 7:33:00 AM
- .... Never lose your dreams .... - Monterey, thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/14/2014 6:53:00 AM
The truth my dear Anne Lise, as you very well know, an unrealized dream for us mortals will remain however it is the noblest of human tasks and we never have to give up trying! A very beautiful approach with powerful expressions!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2014 7:30:00 AM
- .... Never lose hope ....- Demetrios, thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2014 9:26:00 PM
Needless to say, I loved this one, a very touching poem!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2014 2:27:00 AM
- Arthur, thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2014 6:35:00 PM
Just beautiful Anne Lise. I am looking for those things too. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 4/14/2014 2:26:00 AM
- Lucilla, thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2014 5:20:00 PM
Truth comes in silence, as we come to understand the reasons why....A poem of enlightenment you have written my friend
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/14/2014 2:26:00 AM
- Frederic, thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2014 2:39:00 PM
effervescent and filled with marvelous language that lift me way up to the sky.... amazing piece, anne!.. happy sunday-monday!.. huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2014 4:13:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit,Nette - and thank you for taking off your time to give me a comments - always enjoyable to get feedback on what I post :) - Happy monday ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2014 11:59:00 AM
quite a contrast in this one of heavenly beauty and the cruelties of the world. it's a mad mad world!!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2014 12:15:00 PM
- Andrea, thanks for your visit and comments on my poems: "- The Madness Of The World - " - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2014 11:55:00 AM
Lovely write Anne..Hope you're having a wonderful weekend!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2014 12:13:00 PM
- A relaxed and very rainy weekend - thanks for the nice visit my friend Ken. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2014 10:56:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, A friend and I read this together and both feel it is difficult to find peace in this crazy world. Keep "looking for soft stuff" you can hold in your heart. Indeed, these are the things that bring us joy. Very heartfelt write! Love, Carolyn
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2014 11:39:00 AM
- Nice that you share my words with your friend - Happy that you liked my write. - Thanks for the lovely words from you Carolyn. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/13/2014 10:27:00 AM
This is a very lovely and inspiring piece my dear friend Anne Lise. I'm so glad and honored to be the first to read and comment on here. I'll join you in prayer for seeking the truth my dear friend. Kudos & hugs on this great verse. Hope you're doin well always. Happy weekend to u and your loved ones. love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/13/2014 11:40:00 AM
- Thanks for the lovely visit and words from you dear friend Leonora! - Always a pleasure to see you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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